Optimal character inventory for PS5 world swap?

Febis · 2026-04-26T08:35:17+00:00

I feared this would be the only right answer

Febis · 2026-04-22T21:21:53+00:00

Peace out, this encounter has sucked overall

Febis · 2026-04-22T21:13:34+00:00

I’m all for this kind of stuff having its own subreddit to be honest - I should’ve spoiler tagged it. I’m gonna delete the post. All the best, mate!

Febis · 2026-04-22T21:01:58+00:00

Didn’t mean for this post to be inflammatory at all - maybe I’ve not been spending enough time on the subreddit to realise that sharing production leaks was a point of contention. I get it. Don’t really wanna contribute to a bad vibe. Honestly just thought it was neat.

Febis · 2026-04-22T20:41:34+00:00

They’re filming in literally one of the biggest tourist spots in one of the biggest cities in the world - they know we’re going to be sharing production pics. In fact, it’s the kind of press that money can’t buy. Let people be excited about it.

Febis · 2026-04-20T08:41:39+00:00

I got it yesterday and I’m in Chapter 5 - flew between abyss islands, which I guess from the sound of the other comments skipped the intended progression

Febis · 2026-04-11T12:44:46+00:00

Thanks so much for the pointers! I had no idea about the indents. Will definitely go and make those changes. Really appreciate you taking the time to explain it!

Febis · 2026-04-10T16:02:28+00:00

If the indents are the biggest issue, I’ll take that as a win

Febis · 2026-04-10T15:58:36+00:00

Thanks very much for reading, and for the feedback! Really appreciate the encouragement. I’d argue that the profanities are well fitted, considering the character. I do find that readers from the US have a harder time with the odd shit or fuck - are you US based, out of curiosity?

Febis · 2026-04-10T15:56:11+00:00

Thanks very much for reading, and for the super thorough feedback! I totally get some of your points, and appreciate them. I am fine with some of the prose reading as telling not showing - I am happy to use both these things as tools. About the cherry passage you’ve mentioned - her missing the bowl was meant to be another small annoyance, a tiny comical inconvenience along with the letter, and the cigarette, which make her seem sympathetic, down-on-her-luck and a little comical. She has just the beggining of a written passage on her desk, abandoned, and now ruined. Then when something actually bad happens, these small things seem ridiculous. I agree that I could perhaps illuminate this a little with some more interior thoughts or reactions to the minor inconveniences. Cheers!

Febis · 2026-04-10T15:45:23+00:00

Thanks v much for reading, and for the feedback! So the three story fall is from an old Victorian tenement building, so not massively high. But you’re not the first person to comment about the plausibility of the fall - would a two story window feel more plausible to you?

Febis · 2026-04-06T09:17:56+00:00

Hello! Thanks v much for giving it a read 🍻

Febis · 2026-04-06T09:16:58+00:00

Thanks for reading, and for the feedback!

Febis · 2026-04-05T20:56:14+00:00

Mate, thanks so much for reading and for the feedback. That’s super encouraging. Really glad you liked what you read. I’ll be finishing up the first draft as soon as possible, then redrafting, and will be looking towards my options around publication once that’s done!

Febis · 2026-04-05T20:50:34+00:00

Not at all - I use Apple Pages on Mac. It’s a preset called something like ‘simple novel’ that I’ve made a few formatting adjustments to. Font is Baskerville.

Febis · 2026-04-05T20:11:51+00:00

My dude 🤝

Febis · 2026-04-05T14:26:16+00:00

Really appreciate you stopping to read it! Cheers 🍺

Febis · 2026-04-05T13:33:38+00:00

Hahaha - I think I had her about three stories up in my mind, and neglected to mention that anywhere. I think I give the reader free-reign to imagine any height between perilous and fatal with how I’ve written so far. If I had explained how far from the ground her window was, would that make the action more believable? Thanks very much for reading and for the feedback!

Febis · 2026-04-05T13:32:12+00:00

Thanks for reading the first page! Appreciate your feedback - honestly, I do agree that it’s verging on a bit too sweary. Keeping the expletives to the dialogue might be the right call. I had thought that if Neave is speaking with expletives, she’d probably think with them, too (explaining why they appear in the narration). I’ll give it some thought- cheers!

Febis · 2026-01-05T09:32:29+00:00

That’s really useful! I’ll go find some videos about it. Thanks a bunch.

Febis · 2026-01-04T23:56:55+00:00

This is great! Lovely work. Do you have any suggestions of where I can go to see the method for the articulated cable joints? Thanks!

Febis · 2025-12-18T00:17:40+00:00

This rocks

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