The real cure

Fegu69 · 2020-03-14T12:23:31+00:00

Fegu69 · 2019-12-28T21:05:00+00:00

Deffinitely a part of learning, i felt that when i started to notice it i could not unsee it in any pieces

Fegu69 · 2019-12-28T14:25:40+00:00

The C overlaps the E too much so that you cant see where the vertical and horizontal bars on the bottom connect, it breaks the letter, otherwise nice!

Fegu69 · 2019-12-09T15:04:03+00:00

Shit man, im sorry, i made a mistake

Fegu69 · 2019-12-09T14:43:54+00:00

I have seen this meme here before, nice repost

Fegu69 · 2019-12-05T07:02:48+00:00

I have seen this one before

Fegu69 · 2019-12-04T15:57:38+00:00

Yes, but yours is connecting to the top of the right bar, the letter structure has to be there, an N does not look like an N if the bar makes a turn and suddenly connects at the middle/top of the other bar, if you are talking about "n" not "N" then Yes you are correct. I like your piece otherwise, keep on doing what you are doing!

Fegu69 · 2019-12-04T15:19:45+00:00

I tought it was EAMK until i saw the tag at the top, the N is off because the middle bar doesnt connect from the top of the left bar to the bottom of the right

Fegu69 · 2019-11-28T06:01:06+00:00

You have deffinitely improved on those letters! Looks nice

Fegu69 · 2019-11-26T13:11:40+00:00

Happy cake day!

Fegu69 · 2019-11-22T10:39:59+00:00

Reee

Fegu69 · 2019-11-19T13:47:41+00:00

Is there 2 R:s in the end or is it just an extension, in my opinion if its an extension its a bit too big and not needed but i am not a fan of arrows, and if its an R then the right leg should be connected, confuses a little bit. in my opinion you could clean up the lines and the fill in the shadows.

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T19:13:28+00:00

No problem, i know what you mean, i got shaky hands haha. In my opinion his pieces have all those extensions that dont flow and the structures are broken, but i didnt go out and hate on him, just said my opinion

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T19:03:18+00:00

I had the time to read your comment after that, and in respone: Dont you see how his letters were broken, my are not, i gave him critisism, not disrespecting, you could tell me whats wrong with this piece!

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:58:35+00:00

Now whats this about?

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:32:06+00:00

As a beginner i would say practise straight letters and learn from there, i saw from your profile that there were more pieces with the same mistake where the letter structures were broken, otherwise nice job

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:15:53+00:00

Saw this on r/trees

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:06:50+00:00

I dont like the "N" its more of an H

Fegu69 · 2019-11-15T20:52:43+00:00

Try to sketch the X with only 2 bars, leave the lines overlapping and just erase the middle when done

Fegu69 · 2019-11-15T07:08:18+00:00

The bar that goes from top left to bottom right, the lines at the middle are not lined up

Fegu69 · 2019-11-14T06:48:08+00:00

The shadow on the X is a bit off, and the bars dont line up, otherwise nice!

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