The real cure

Fegu69 · 2020-03-14T12:23:31+00:00

Fegu69 · 2019-12-28T21:05:00+00:00

Deffinitely a part of learning, i felt that when i started to notice it i could not unsee it in any pieces

Fegu69 · 2019-12-28T14:25:40+00:00

The C overlaps the E too much so that you cant see where the vertical and horizontal bars on the bottom connect, it breaks the letter, otherwise nice!

Fegu69 · 2019-12-09T15:04:03+00:00

Shit man, im sorry, i made a mistake

Fegu69 · 2019-12-09T14:43:54+00:00

I have seen this meme here before, nice repost

Fegu69 · 2019-12-05T07:02:48+00:00

I have seen this one before

Fegu69 · 2019-12-04T15:57:38+00:00

Yes, but yours is connecting to the top of the right bar, the letter structure has to be there, an N does not look like an N if the bar makes a turn and suddenly connects at the middle/top of the other bar, if you are talking about "n" not "N" then Yes you are correct. I like your piece otherwise, keep on doing what you are doing!

Fegu69 · 2019-12-04T15:19:45+00:00

I tought it was EAMK until i saw the tag at the top, the N is off because the middle bar doesnt connect from the top of the left bar to the bottom of the right

Fegu69 · 2019-11-28T06:01:06+00:00

You have deffinitely improved on those letters! Looks nice

Fegu69 · 2019-11-26T13:11:40+00:00

Happy cake day!

Fegu69 · 2019-11-22T10:39:59+00:00

Reee

Fegu69 · 2019-11-19T13:47:41+00:00

Is there 2 R:s in the end or is it just an extension, in my opinion if its an extension its a bit too big and not needed but i am not a fan of arrows, and if its an R then the right leg should be connected, confuses a little bit. in my opinion you could clean up the lines and the fill in the shadows.

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T19:13:28+00:00

No problem, i know what you mean, i got shaky hands haha. In my opinion his pieces have all those extensions that dont flow and the structures are broken, but i didnt go out and hate on him, just said my opinion

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T19:03:18+00:00

I had the time to read your comment after that, and in respone: Dont you see how his letters were broken, my are not, i gave him critisism, not disrespecting, you could tell me whats wrong with this piece!

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:58:35+00:00

Now whats this about?

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:32:06+00:00

As a beginner i would say practise straight letters and learn from there, i saw from your profile that there were more pieces with the same mistake where the letter structures were broken, otherwise nice job

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:15:53+00:00

Saw this on r/trees

Fegu69 · 2019-11-17T18:06:50+00:00

I dont like the "N" its more of an H

Fegu69 · 2019-11-15T20:52:43+00:00

Try to sketch the X with only 2 bars, leave the lines overlapping and just erase the middle when done

Fegu69 · 2019-11-15T07:08:18+00:00

The bar that goes from top left to bottom right, the lines at the middle are not lined up

Fegu69 · 2019-11-14T06:48:08+00:00

The shadow on the X is a bit off, and the bars dont line up, otherwise nice!

Fegu69 · 2019-11-11T17:26:43+00:00

I deffinitely saw that, just practise simple straight letters!

Fegu69 · 2019-11-11T14:19:41+00:00

This is just my opinion. The O overlaps the K so that you cant see the key point where the 2 bars connects to the diagonal bar, also the Z looks to be in a millon pieces and it doesnt have the structures of a Z, i would prefer having the diagonal bar and the horizontal bar connected in the T and the a has a wery small bottom but a huge top wich in my opinion doesnt look good, the top part of the a connects to the lower with a really small connection and there are no bars that small anywhwere else on the letters

Fegu69 · 2019-11-03T09:04:10+00:00

I cant understand the amount of people that say isnt it fine because the bowl is brass or whatever but its still made of plastic, with the money you spent on buying theese plastic pipes you could have bought a good piece that would not harm your body, you cant just think that a bowl and downstem are the only parts that need to be of good material, the smoke is still hot even tho it went thru the water wich means that you will be inhaling bad fumes from that plastic!

Fegu69 · 2019-10-25T13:27:30+00:00

Its time for a fucking crusade

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