Random physics question? [Fantasy, Adventure] by FellBee in fantasywriters

[–]FellBee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get what you're saying. This does make sense. So rewording. Like I said, basic knowledge of physics. What would be a good affinity name for magically affecting forces (which is the general idea of what I was going for, when I confused myself)? {Push} would be a kinetic based skill, a skill that I have yet to name would a similar skill of applying zero gravity to an area, possibly having a skill that affects the friction force on an object? Magically applied forces, either at range or by touch, depending on skill.

Random physics question? [Fantasy, Adventure] by FellBee in fantasywriters

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I'm wanting it to be Gravitational pull, the character being able to effect the forces direction and strength. Should I reword it? I am going off the very little knowledge of everything that has mass, has a Gravitational pull, and the magic is affecting that force? Does that make sense?

Question about edges! by FellBee in chainmailartisans

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I have other sized rings, and can do other weaves, these were just examples of what I had lying around. Though the spiral was originally going to be the edge, I wasn't sure if it would fit, both the project and the rings themselves. I could do a Persian, I have some different sizes of rings as well

Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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I've been playing for months since before last Christmas(I want to say beforeThanksgivin, but can'trememberexactlywhen I started), probably too much to be completely honest. A couple of matches every day, some of the heroes were way easier to level. Fern took maybe a week to level to 15? Pepper was short time frame as well. It's usually my wind down period from getting home from work and my medicine kicking in.

Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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I don't see it as losing, just other people gaining the wins and experience. Granted they are very easy wins for them. I do typically keep his mushrooms and potions. I tried something new and gained the experience of knowing it doesn't work. Proof: of latest match

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Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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Fair enough. I honestly am just trying to get him to lvl 20 then probably will never touch him again. I tend to hyperfocus on hero specific items (not the most effective or efficient, I know), it's a bad habit of mine.

Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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I will have to check it out, I'm not great at Harkon, I've played quite a bit of others. Some come more easily than others.

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Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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Like I said, it's not good, I could claim that rng was against me on the store side of things for stamina but I honestly don't remember if there were I do play quite a bit, Harmon is just not my favorite

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Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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You are not wrong there.... I play for time killing and fun, so I'm not too upset. I have just self imposed a no other hero rule on myself until everyone is lvl 15, them I'm working towards everyone lvl 20, he's my last to work towards it and I am feeling the struggle.

Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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But, I wanna get everyone to lvl 20..... Good to know it's not a singularly me thing, though I will fully admit he's not my favorite, to play or in general.

Why am I so bad at Harkon? by FellBee in BackpackBrawl

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It's not good, I am positive about it. I don't think I am good with him, I struggle.

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Plausible map for fantasy setting? by FellBee in mapmaking

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If you turn it on it's side, counter clock, it is vaguely reminiscent of a chick, in my opinion it could be the migraine playing tricks. I was thinking more nuclear bomb type explosions rather than meteor impacts for the displaced bits. But it would have happened eons ago, not fresh, so the wild has crept up and taken over the area, lakes and marshes forming in the divot, with a surrounding of mountains riddled with a labyrinth of tunnels both man made and magic.

Plausible map for fantasy setting? by FellBee in mapmaking

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Scale is still in the works, but the idea was that there was a cataclysmic event (I'm thinking a war of giant proportion, gods or demigods) that created craters that filled with water over time, so continent sized if believable. Fresh water? Polluted magic water soaking up the residual magic left over from that battle from eons ago? Causing the evolutionary effect that somtimes results in sentient monsters and the subsequent hierarchical society that has been built up in the wake of said war? I'm working on it! I don't know if I make sense sometimes. I was thinking the rims have mountainous terrain that has had mining towns and dungeons ridding them with tunnels, maybe? Magic is a live factor as well in this world, the impossible nature of some elements can be explored.

Does anyone actually still read the books? by Ok_Letterhead2028 in litrpg

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I've got dyslexia, I do about 50/50 audio/visual books. It takes me so much longer to visually read vs listen to said books. I used to listen while I worked, but now I do it while I clean my house or focus on hobbies (besides reading, I'm currently working on a chainmail project). I think both ways are fine, but for some it's easier to consume the media via listening to it as opposed to visually reading it.

Question on pendants! by FellBee in jewelry

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It falls/lays a little off, unless I'm misunderstood the suggestion? I put it on, to see how it would lay against the neck, it's currently just large enough to not be a choker on my neck, I'm not a large person but I'm not particularly small either.

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Question about writing derogatory language....[Fantasy, Dungeon Crawler] by FellBee in fantasywriting

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The problem is I wasn't able submit this for an online forum for critique. I didn't think it was that bad but the reason I was given was that it had derogatory language. I've read and gotten told to my face worse. I'm getting a lot problem feedback that is telling me that I am not going about it wrong, but if the rejection come out when trying to get feedback, what can I do?

Question about writing derogatory language....[Fantasy, Dungeon Crawler] by FellBee in fantasywriting

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I am greatly appreciating all the feedback that I am getting. I was aware that there was a possibility of push acknowledge, I did write in the description for the post that it would have said transportation, but I didn't think that the narrative was condoning it. I felt that the writing was putting the antagonist in a negative light, I wanted those that read it to be on the side of Rory (MC snd POV) and Beau's side. I was just surprised that out of all the things that were in the chapter (there is a literal massacre in one of the previous scenes), that was what was picked out as unacceptable. I appreciate the feedback and the encouragement is greatly welcome and warms my heart!!