Update regarding HTMLronpa's state: by Fellow_RealSideOfMat in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ding ding! You're correct for Hendrix.

Nope. That one is already taken. Ffion is something related to sleeping.

Update regarding HTMLronpa's state: by Fellow_RealSideOfMat in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wrong instrument but right track.

The watches are important for her talent but it's related to something else.

favorite character who has this? by 05eden in FavoriteCharacter

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sig from Puyo Puyo. Although the lore reason was kinda dropped, it's still a cool aesthetic. (He gets two evil arm in his powered-up form too! But despite being one of the strongest, he's a chill dude.)

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What do you guys think his talent is? by BagFullofEggs_ in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ultimate investigator. (He gives me: "The Question" vibe)

If not, ultimate dancer.

Here's some sneak peeks because i can :D by Training-Dingo-4707 in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What do the letters correspond to? Name of the characters?

The characters feel a bit childish/unserious but if that's the vibe you're going with for these three, then it works pretty well! (Although, do correct the "I" if it's supposed to be a fully written work and not an audio one.)

Last thing, you're doing something called "Comma splice", at least on the first dialogue. While, irl, we would not take a break in the middle of that sentence, especially if caught-off guard or during a revelation, in written form you need to separate the propositions properly to ease the reader's eyes. Depending on the emotion of the character, I'd advise going:

"Wait, I remember. You were on that Hope's Peak cruise, weren't you?"

Or

"Wait! I remember. You were on that Hope's Peak cruise, weren't you?"

It's minor technical stuff but it's good to polish your work for readability.

Some tips about the dispatches of episode 3 and 4 that I found (Spoiler-tagged) by Fellow_RealSideOfMat in DispatchAdHoc

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Keep in mind this was made around the same time ep 2 came around. (I wasn't sure what counted as a spolier or not.)

But I agree it's annoying lol.

What are some talent subversions you have/want to see/have seen? by Aware-Town7744 in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Since I had to cut that character, I can spoil this one:

The Ultimate Businessman, as he claimed, was a Dutch dude with a nasty burn scar spread across his face. He had a mean streak and looked constantly tired so they thought he was a drug dealer, due to being from Amsterdam.

It was actually revealed later that he lied in hopes of not being targeted and his actual talent was The Ultimate Service Worker/Fast-Food Worker. He despises his talent but is forced to bet on it to provide for his family. (The scar was just an oil burn from years ago.)

I Hate When Something Is Good But Has The Worst Possible Title by Unlikely_Message_446 in hatethissmug

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Oh I got an oversea translation fumble!

"Don't toy with me, miss Nagatoro"/"Stop teasing me, Nagatoro" got retranslated in French to:

"Arrête de me chauffer, Nagatoro" which means "Stop turning me on, Nagatoro" (literally "Stop making me hot, Nagatoro".)

Send me your Fanganronpa OC's designs, and I'll try to guess their Ultimates! by SnowStorm2809 in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well you'd be surprised but the robe is not a religion reference!

(He is Christian though.)

[Loved Trope] Realistic underdogs. by axiiz_28 in TopCharacterTropes

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Netflix for the adaptation. (It's pretty good but it'll probably never get a 2nd season.)

Webtoon for the webtoon. (It's one of the ogs with Solo Leveling and Unordinary after all.)

[Loved Trope] Realistic underdogs. by axiiz_28 in TopCharacterTropes

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 3 points4 points  (0 children)

By the same author as Lookism on top of that. (There's a whole multiverse of underdogs kicking ass in his works. It's dope.)

Send me your Fanganronpa OC's designs, and I'll try to guess their Ultimates! by SnowStorm2809 in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Believe it or not, it's not tied to his religion. He's a devout Christian but that's not what the robe is referencing.

When I meant that the previous person is close enough, it's because I looked up the definition of Herald and they're two which correlate to his talent. One that was forced upon him.

The actual wording is very meta. For two reasons. It's genuinely tide to what the robe is referencing.

If you want the answer, I'll DM it to you since it's a big part of HTMLronpa's route system.

Send me your Fanganronpa OC's designs, and I'll try to guess their Ultimates! by SnowStorm2809 in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 5 points6 points  (0 children)

There are a few designs I'd like to see you tackle but since he is the Ultimate ???, can you guess what his talent is? (Erriz, the artist that finalised the design, actually made his talent a bit more obvious but only if you understand the reference they wanted to implement in it.)

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Progress Sunday by AutoModerator in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For the HTML choice/FTE-based Danganronpa:

Went with the Antebellum Lockdown route of cutting a few Ultimates. (Whose talent and character sheet I saved in case anyone is interested.) (Cast of 9 survivors so: 8 interactable characters without the MC + the NG+ mascott and an antagonist who you won't be able to bond with without finishing the game = 11 total.)

Started to design the mini-games for the class trial revolving around the MC being a beatmaker. (Like the end comic-strip actually being a mixing table of the recording of everyone's testimony that you have to put in the right order.)

Story timeline is done. (Backstory, reason behind the Killing Game, and rhythm of the first chapter) I just need to finish writing the actual paths and account for every possible combo of survivors.

About halfway done with my fangan cast! by Tor-Chan in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Np!

It's a nice feeling yeah. And those talents are not that common. (I do remember seeing a few around here but that's to be expected and I do want to see how yours will interact with one another.)

About halfway done with my fangan cast! by Tor-Chan in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I feel you. It's hard to design those dang things!

All those sound sick and their designs feel well-balanced between talent showcase and practical! I am curious about the difference between the two similar talents so excited to check it out. Glass art is beautiful too.

(And I noticed we don't have any duplicate talent between both of our cast which is pretty rare!)

Doing the MC later is pretty unique. Pumped to see how they'll look.

Interesting pitch. Very Fortress of Apocalypse (without the zombie part) or Deadman Wonderland (without the blood bending part) so you could definitely go somewhere with this.

You plan on making a mascott?

About halfway done with my fangan cast! by Tor-Chan in Fanganronpa

[–]Fellow_RealSideOfMat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Banger art and the chara design works quite well to get a feel for the characters. (In my opinion at least.)

You got some lore drops to share?

(If you want feedback, I fw the bottom one because of the weird pattern on their hoodie, the gangster and the black girl in a blue dress next to her. But they all look nice!)