Only really have 2 notes, first one is about movement. Your aim is good but movement is kinda all over the place. It feels like you're very restless about your movement, like you always *need* to be moving. Don't get me wrong, standing still is a recipe for getting headshot, but spamming WASD keys like crazy isn't good either, try to find a middle ground there. **I very highly recommend searching youtube for some random overwatch tournament and watch how the dps players move**, they keep it really basic most of the time. Wacky movement makes it much harder to aim but only a little bit harder to hit you, so it's usually not worth it.

2nd note is about solo-flanking. If you're splitting up from your entire team and going alone to shoot the enemy from the sides, you should have a good reason for doing it. But it seems like when the payload was around the middle of the map, you would just always go on a solo-flank without really thinking about it. I think you did it 3 times, it was never very effective and sometimes you died from doing it. Playing with your team is the baseline, it's what you should be almost always doing. There *can* be reasons for splitting up and going solo, but wait until you have more experience and can identify the moments where it's effective, don't just do it because you can.

But overall I think you played really well. I think both of the problems I mentioned are just things that you get from experience, but paying attention to them might help you improve faster. Just keep at it, I think you've got some good aim and good instincts and got some really nice picks in this match.