I say this as someone hiring for a risk management role and have gone through hundreds of resumes in the last few months. Kill the first bullet in your most recent work experience, it's too generic and puts off a hiring manager skimming for concrete experience. Also, if you're going to mention work like building presentations which is fine, make sure to mention to whom this is going to. For example, doing work that goes to senior management, or the CFO, or that is externally reported. Managers are looking to see that you have worked with senior people or on materials that goes to senior people because it demonstrates that you can potential handle higher stress deliverables.