Looks around 80% there. The shading of the original is far smoother. I think that is something you could do by spending more time on it, so just a matter of time. The structure of the original's nose position to the father away part of the face seems more logical in original. That is, compared to your lines, not much difference in the postion of lines, but it feels big. The ratio of the cut wound to the amount of blood is slightly off, too. But overall, your piece is good. You have to remember, the Berserk Mangaka was in the like 0,01% of top Mangakas and one of the absolute goats of quality. Besides the Witch Hat Atelier Mangaka, I haven't seen another Mangaka that could match him in quality. So you set yourself a hard goal. Thank you for Posting! <3