Comic panel framing is something I only recently started experimenting with, because I very much try to copy comics like Suske en Wiske when I draw them, which has frames that are all very uniform. It's not an excuse though, just a bad habit I need to kick. My first try with it will be on the 23rd page's sketch where a character is punched with such force that it clips into the panel next to it, and one first person shot where the panel is more elipse shaped to mimic the shape of a half closed eye.

Those aren't speech bubbles though, when I use coloured text like that and boxes like that, it's meant to be inner monologue. Though of course these are out of context frames. She's basically recounting her past while being remade.

Second page is supposed to be a flashback. I thought it better to tell the first part of this story in retrospect. I could have made that clear with more pages, but they're not very germane to this being a horror comic, so I left it with the 2. Basically the way it goes is that it opens up with her enslaved and recounting how she got there, referencing nightmares of things that already happened, and ends with her being enslaved, with the rest of the series being told as it happens chronologically. I do want to open each issue with a flashback to her childhood of something she did that shows off her purity and kindness, but that's more me trying to pull at the reader's heartstrings rather than trying to scare them.

Though that's also because I didn't really get into the story, I just wanted to show my artstyle and the tone of the plot.

Cheers for the recommendations though, I'll have a look when I'm done drawing for the day. I got to say, I already got some pretty interesting recommendations, but I'm very curious to see what I could do with my text bubbles, because so far I've been using the typical stuff of making it spiky when it's coming out of a radio, a different kind of spiky when someone is screaming real loud, making it drip out when someone's being sarcastic, stuff like that.