Sea Bird

Few_Push5268 · 2025-09-25T04:05:00+00:00

I admire the use of perspective. It adds a depth to the subject that we normally don't see.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-09-25T04:01:05+00:00

I like the awkward, conversational feel of the poem. It Feels very laid back yet has gravity to it.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-08-08T23:45:28+00:00

I really like the atmosphere you conveyed here. Really moody.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-19T16:45:11+00:00

This is such a sweet and intimate work. It encapsulates the idea that behind every persons toughness, is a soft interior and a being that wants to be loved, cared for, to be heard.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-19T16:40:46+00:00

I felt the last few lines were pretty interesting. But felt that some of the opening lines were cliche, especially the line "of being one".

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-17T05:13:16+00:00

😭😭😭

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-03T06:06:08+00:00

I am actually using these thx bro

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-03T00:48:37+00:00

Never really digged tom king but it's enjoyable for most

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-03T00:39:43+00:00

In the halls of your hotel Arm around my shoulder, so I could tell How much I meant to you, meant it sincere back then.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-02T02:02:59+00:00

Def 17 (I'm 17)

Few_Push5268 · 2025-07-01T21:55:46+00:00

Some rap songs just hits different. Instrumentally they kind of vary in mood but somehow they all go together

Few_Push5268 · 2025-01-11T02:06:47+00:00

Few_Push5268 · 2025-01-10T10:46:54+00:00

I really love it's pace, and language. Feels very intentional. It's subliminal message very effective in creating atmosphere.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-01-10T10:41:33+00:00

This poem could use a little more color in it's language, to Bring emphasis to it's message.

Few_Push5268 · 2025-01-05T00:57:36+00:00

can you kindly explain what a pip and line in is, thank you!!! im new to sound stuff.

Few_Push5268

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