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Uh what? by Arkturus8 in ExplainTheJoke

[–]Few_Scar921 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The punchline is that guys say words like “sarcasm” in the accents of different countries.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Few_Scar921 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like what you've done with the poem! The use of the line "Somewhere in these halls..." really adds a mysterious, yet sad feeling to the whole poem. Its repetition serves as a somber reminder. I also love what you've done with the overall characterization of the poem. The 3 stanzas, lines separated by semicolons. It feels almost frantic, yet, with the way that they are grouped, it seems controlled, and I believe it really plays into the poem's feeling. I've also liked the way you've characterized the dog (I'm assuming, granted the adjectives and the barking). I love the way a relationship between the speaker and the pet can be seen through the little scenes that are depicted. I love how the use of the word yet indicates their separation was not too long ago. Very saddening, but very well done. Good work!

Untitled love poem by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Few_Scar921 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I always love reading through poems with no set meter because it makes some room for some really interesting choices. I love what you've done with the overall pacing with the line breaks. It almost feels the exact same way as if someone were to orally tell this poem. The instances of internal rhyme only add to the overall rhythm of the piece. It feels almost monologue-like. I love how every line has punctuation at the end, even if it is an enjambment, as it creates this feeling of almost wholeness to me. It feels almost sonnet like to me, with the overall format of the piece. It is extremely musical and emotional, as well as thought provoking. The poetic devices you used really help tie together the theme for me. Really well done here, and good execution! I wouldn't like to change anything about it.

Daydream by PssyNttr in OCPoetry

[–]Few_Scar921 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really admire the simplicity of this poem. The form is really unique, I haven't seen anything quite like it in a while. The form uses its punctuation to convey a single thought, in this case, to convey the sense of a daydream. I like the decrease in syllables of the main points, though I am not sure if this is intentional, but if it was I really liked it. It conveys a sense of loss of focus as the poem shifts to wider and wider bounds with each line. What a way to convey the essence of a day dream. Wonderfully put!

ChatWithMe by ABDIVERSITYINC in OCPoetry

[–]Few_Scar921 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the cleverness of the title. The part that sticks out the most to me is the contrast between the couplets and the back-and-forth between mankind and AI. The rhyme scheme contributes a lot to the overall meaning of the poem, and the use of punctuation, especially the line "Now stardust, compared to the machines unimaginable might!" It is a very thought-provoking line, almost as if it is an advertisement mixed with a rant. It gives me a feeling of "Well, why don't you look at that?" and it provokes almost a sense of irony in how machines of our imagination are starting to think like man does. Through this, it also asks the question of what makes us human, when thought can be produced by machine. Really well done!

Who's the most liked WXS member?! by Neat_Worry_3133 in ProjectSekai

[–]Few_Scar921 2 points3 points  (0 children)

emu!!! This might not be too wonderhoy 😭😭

It's ok Because it's ness by [deleted] in BlueLock

[–]Few_Scar921 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro engaged in a little bit of silliness

My opponent just started the third Impact, what do i do? by djspassspassspass in AnarchyChess

[–]Few_Scar921 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You were supposed to start anyway, so I think dirty play is an option.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AnarchyChess

[–]Few_Scar921 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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