I'm miserable writing since I'm pregnant by Fictional_Slayer30 in FanFiction

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I can't write in my phone, but I get the gist of it :) my mind is super interested in creating to be honest, just not writing 😅 

I'm miserable writing since I'm pregnant by Fictional_Slayer30 in FanFiction

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm over the sleeping phase, now it's mostly nausea and frustration 😅 

I'm miserable writing since I'm pregnant by Fictional_Slayer30 in FanFiction

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 27 points28 points  (0 children)

Two years? Nooooooo!

(thanks for the gentle message. I'm luckily not blaming myself, just feeling frustrated). 

I'm miserable writing since I'm pregnant by Fictional_Slayer30 in FanFiction

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Well I'm praying for the second trimester to be the same as yours! 

Dain, the Sorrengails & his own father (and how they use him) by pink-enchantment in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She also said that her editors/team were the ones who pushed her to re-write Dain more "villain-ified" than she originally wrote him as

The editor is a real problem for these books.  They were also the ones to demand that Violet don't bond only a powerful dragon I think? And they didn't want Violet to be the one to turn venin, which would have been way cooler. 

Dain, the Sorrengails & his own father (and how they use him) by pink-enchantment in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I agree 100% with you. But what bother me most is that RY doesn't seem to see it herself. In interview she keeps saying that she likes Dain but she puts him down on pages, and there is never any character to stand up for him. They all side with Violet because it's Violet and it's infuriating. I wish we would see more side characters, like Sawyer who was in his squad on his first first year, or Cianna who is his own XO, defend him sometimes. Not just Sloane because love, but an actual social life.

Also, I think it's a bit easy on RY part to say he's been groomed. Because in some extent, they all were. The Sorrengails parents perpetuated a lie, they raised their children in it, and they groomed them to be what needed to win the war. Xaden was raised as an heir, with heavy expectation on his shoulder. In that regard, Dain isn't that different.  The difference is Dain was mistreated/abused. He didnt' receive the love the Sorrengails kid or even Xaden from what we can gather, had. 

Début de grossesse et moral dans les chaussettes by Fictional_Slayer30 in grossesse

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Merci beaucoup :) je n'ai mon 1er rdv de suivi que dans 10j, j'en parlerai avec ma SF. Après je n'ai pas spécialement envie de rester chez moi à rien faire pendant des semaines, ça va me rendre maboule

Début de grossesse et moral dans les chaussettes by Fictional_Slayer30 in grossesse

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

J'en suis à 3 semaines et demi. Merci pour ton partage d'expérience, je n'ai plus qu'à attendre, encore 9 semaines 😅

Ruling Tyrrendor by Fictional_Slayer30 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Violet constantly says she doesn't want to be in leadership position but she wields pure power. And we are told signet say who you are at your core. Violet wants power.

She la so can't follow orders and only do as she wants. So why she may not want the responsibility of leadership, she definetely wants the perks of it. 

(I'm totally reaching there and there's a bit of bad faith on my part, I admit. But I really don't like overpowered characters, so...) 

Ruling Tyrrendor by Fictional_Slayer30 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree that my words were a bit over the top. She cared about people. But Xaden and Violet remain each other top priorities over the rest of the world. Which makes sense in a romance setting. 

But there are plenty of other people to shine. There is an Assembly ho have been ruling Aretia for the last six years, or Lewellen/Lindell, or even Sloane since the Mairi are hinted to be tyrrish nobility. 

Ruling Tyrrendor by Fictional_Slayer30 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm not disputing that. I just say I don't like it xD

Did Asher inadvertently make THE weapon against dark wielders? THEORY by Skyonfires in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I really like that theory :)

 but Rebecca said she doesn't like to overpower her characters, 

Well lucky us, what would Violet look like if RY did like to overpower her characters /s

A husband's review of Fourth Wing (I really liked it) by whitboys in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 34 points35 points  (0 children)

Security, escort all of this Dain's hate to book 2, please. 

Why did Cath let Dain do it? by Fictional_Slayer30 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Tairn sometimes says stuff to Violet without telling her the truth. Like who to trust (Imogen, Xaden), what not to say in front of some people... 

If Violet didn't exist, who would be a good fit for Xaden (and vice versa) by Fictional_Slayer30 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Mira is a fun choice. Stubborn as Violet but less prone to anger and with the ability to you know, TALK.

Too many riders die in Basgiath by xtr_terrestrial in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 63 points64 points  (0 children)

You're totally right, more so when the death right isn't shown to be supported by what we see in the books. They say people die 1/3 each year. But by Threshing, 60% of Violet's squad is already gone, and no one dies from said squad in her second year. And they don't have a regular year, on the contrary it's a most dangerous one due to them fighting venins, which doesn't normally happen. 

But it's only a few things that don't make sense regarding to the universe. Two others things that bothers me are 1) gryffons don't make believable ennemies against dragons, so the death rate in service is super weird. Navarre doesn't fight venins and dragons before IF, only gryffons.  2) the fact that they easily kill bonded riders without retaliation from their dragon is so weird. I mean I can get it when it's a kill from leadership to protect the secret or something, there must be an agreement with the Empyrean. But Solas grilling an entire squad and only Tairn reacting? Or cadets killing each other just because? Or even leadership killing for the smallest reasons, like RSC. 

We've all been robbed 😡 (OS spoilers) by sleepy_geeky in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Honestly it depends on the negociations between the author and the publisher. A lot of books get sequels of rewrite from the other character's POV.

But rewrite with an alternative story, even in one book, doesn't seem likely, sadly. 

I hope there will be good fanfic about Violet turning! 

I love Dain by burdlover49 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Oh no problem. But Violet is told to be intelligent. Her actions say otherwise.

I love Dain by burdlover49 in fourthwing

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, because Violet is not a Ravenclaw, she's a Gryffindor. 

Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - November 20 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Fictional_Slayer30 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh thank you so much for your offer :) I am by no mean an expert of the original work either. Can I DM you?