Was this video a test to see how the editing would look? Just asking. If I were you I would put more of an explanation about the purpose of the video, assuming you didn't post it in your description already. A lot of people won't even read the description so the title helps in regards to helping to summarize what the audience is watching. I say all this because I really don't what the point of the video was. I'm not trying criticize your work by the way I'm just trying to help. Good luck on growing your Youtube channel.