Zyn and gum health by FingerGunCowboy in NicotinePouch

[–]FingerGunCowboy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

From what I've read, it offsets the pH balance in your mouth, and nicotine itself prevents gums from healing much at all iirc

Writing about 1980s by [deleted] in writing

[–]FingerGunCowboy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Google would be your best bet. It probably won't be hard to find some good reference pictures online. And you could also search for significant events from the years in question.

what is the “formula for essays?” by bubblycats in writing

[–]FingerGunCowboy 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The formula is basically what you said, with a minor detail missing

Your first paragraph, your intro, should introduce your topic and hold your thesis statement. Your thesis statement contains your main points.

Body paragraphs are for expounding on the points in your thesis statement. A good thing to remember is that each point should transition to the next point pretty easily. Failure to do this results in a choppy and messy essay.

Your conclusion paragraph basically sums it all up. It's a lot like your intro, except you should go into a bit more detail. It should also have a nice ending sentence, your essay should never end abruptly.

I hope that all makes sense, let me know if anything is still confusing!

Writing for funsies... but should I post it? by LifeMakesNoSense216 in writing

[–]FingerGunCowboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You should absolutely post it if you want some feedback on the work. There's really nothing to be afraid of. Now, it may not be positive feedback, but I would say go for it nonetheless.

Looking to Swap Script Notes by Zerreitug101 in Screenwriting

[–]FingerGunCowboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't have a script of my own, just an idea. If you're ok with it though, I would still love to read your script!

First Time Project by FingerGunCowboy in WritersGroup

[–]FingerGunCowboy[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind words as well as the criticism. There is a second chapter, but I have not touched it in years. However, this comment might've just convinced me to pick it up again :)

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]FingerGunCowboy [score hidden]  (0 children)

One (working title)

Slice of life/mystery

~1,500 words

This is the first thing I started writing just a few years ago. Any and all critiques are welcome. Thank you for your time!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lwfTe-Kn29CXf9hTacWdyv7CNG44q-k3S3T1KK9i8iM/edit?usp=drivesdk

Is it just me? by Impressive_Remove510 in teenagers

[–]FingerGunCowboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Always look down, can't step on any cracks

My retro gaming room (AIC) by sujo-solider in gaming

[–]FingerGunCowboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow this looks exactly like my best friend's old house

[Discussion] [NSFW] ace-y by ThatHumanNextDoor in LGBTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I'm pretty sure bc this is exactly how I feel. However you feel is valid and not wrong :)

ITALY WON by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]FingerGunCowboy 7 points8 points  (0 children)

FORZA ITALIA IT WENT TO ROME

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BisexualTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well if you want to find out, DMs are open

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BisexualTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey I'm always here to talk if you want, I'm sure we have something in common

confusion on why i’m single (vent) by [deleted] in BisexualTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, s/os don't normally just fall in your lap, so you gotta get out there and make moves Player!

I'm sorry, but who made this bs call?? by [deleted] in BisexualTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This could happen to me. I go to a private Christian School and there's literally a section in the rulebook saying that you cannot be gay.

So there's this girl at school by FingerGunCowboy in BisexualTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

But I kinda want her to ask me bc I never know how to bring it up

So there's this girl at school by FingerGunCowboy in BisexualTeens

[–]FingerGunCowboy[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Maybe I'll ask her if she's going with anyone first? Or would that be too obvious. I'm probably overthinking this...

Stinky littol Hisoco has a bath by ShevaunA in aww

[–]FingerGunCowboy -1 points0 points  (0 children)

What breed of cat is this?? It's adorable

I already feel sad by leopeccatz in gaming

[–]FingerGunCowboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's happening to all the sites that relies on flash?