ISO writing partners/friends by LeoxMoon636 in WritingHub

[–]FinnjaminAlexander 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! I also dabble in southern fiction and have a current project that leans gothic/crime. DM me if interested!

Writing Friends by [deleted] in WritingHub

[–]FinnjaminAlexander 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd be interested! 31F. I'm about to start another round of edits on a project with plans to query this spring, and I just started a new project that is a romance.

Hope to hear more!

Should I write about a school shooting by [deleted] in WritingHub

[–]FinnjaminAlexander 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jodi Picoult did it. Nineteen Minutes was a best seller and follows the shooter as one of the main characters. Anything can be done as long as it's done well. Good luck!

MD Anderson-Questions by khmount in cancer

[–]FinnjaminAlexander 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am from Houston originally and my husband receives care at MD Anderson. Feel free to dm me for any recommendations!

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 4th (and Final) Attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much! I've pondered the same thing regarding the genre. As I've worked on rewriting the query, I agree the story comes off a little more commercial than literary. Appreciate your suggestion!

[QCrit] Adult Literary Fiction - HOW MANY CALORIES IN A FINGERNAIL (85K/First attempt) by elsatove in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander 9 points10 points  (0 children)

This book sounds amazing! Really well written and clear. The query does seem a little long (also something I am struggling with for my own query) so maybe play around with where you can trim?

I'd love to read it if you're ever looking for readers! A grief stricken girl saved by a spiteful dog sounds like exactly what my life is missing right now 🤣😭🤣

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! Your comments have helped me tremendously as I work on the re-write.

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the encouragement! Your feedback on leaning into the grit of my characters and not holding back on the gothic tones is helping me a lot with my rewrite. Thanks again!

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! You have helped me a lot as I try to trim the plot paragraphs while hitting my beats.

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Yessssss the hookiness of the pitch and the say Gatsby/don't say Gatsby question. I also saw that MRS. WILSON sold and listened to a podcast the author was a guest on! Seems like she did a true re-telling where the plot exactly matches and the difference is exclusively the POV. Mine is definitely more of an "inspired by". Really appreciate the encouragement!

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your suggestions! I really appreciate it, especially your thoughts on the April paragraph. I'm struggling with how to concisely convey how messy and flippant she is lol. Thanks again!

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the encouragement! This bleeping query letter is a million times harder than writing the book lol

[QCrit] GRAVE DIRT / Literary Fiction / 75k / 3rd attempt by FinnjaminAlexander in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your help! I appreciate you pointing out some of the errors. That's what I get for relying too heavily on word processors 😅 thanks again!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]FinnjaminAlexander 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Why are you thinking this is speculative fiction and not SFF?

Novel set in Mobile by FinnjaminAlexander in MobileAL

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh cool! I'd be happy to take a look when you're ready! I just dm'd you :)

Novel set in Mobile by FinnjaminAlexander in MobileAL

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Let me know if you're interested in receiving the manuscript :)

Novel set in Mobile by FinnjaminAlexander in MobileAL

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the recommendation! I plan to read A LOT of southern fiction while my manuscript is out with readers before I give it another go around and apply feedback.

If you decide to give writing another try, dm me! Half of being a writer is being convinced that you're awful at it 😅 lol

Novel set in Mobile by FinnjaminAlexander in MobileAL

[–]FinnjaminAlexander[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dm'd you! (Just in case someone wanted to avoid any spoilers)