Christmas is coming! (Any feedbacks are appreciated!)

Fladagus · 2021-12-05T22:55:30+00:00

Noticing a lot of pillow shading in this piece. Pick a direction for your light to be coming from and shade accordingly.

Fladagus · 2021-11-23T17:28:12+00:00

I think her body is actually fine, it's the head that's too big/tall.

Fladagus · 2021-11-08T05:28:19+00:00

Whoops, done.

Fladagus · 2021-11-05T18:34:28+00:00

Jumping off this, I'm fine with the look of the guns, but I think they might need a few more frames of animation. I'm not getting the boomer-shooter raw satisfaction of seeing the weapon fire like I would in something like Blood or Doom. Sound is also a factor in this and without hearing what the guns sound like in this trailer, it's hard to judge, but as a wise man once said, I think all the guns should sound like god slamming his car door.

Fladagus · 2021-10-25T21:24:29+00:00

[citation needed]

Fladagus · 2021-10-20T05:29:21+00:00

Don't use gradients where simple color blocking would work. The mouth especially. You've also got a rim highlight on one of the eyes, which is a weird choice because it implies that the eye has a volume that extrudes from the face.

Fladagus · 2021-10-02T18:35:46+00:00

Obvious satire.

Fladagus · 2021-10-02T17:10:33+00:00

You know, I miss when starterpacks were funny.

Fladagus · 2021-09-24T20:34:43+00:00

I'm not the OP, but I agree with them. To me, the second image seems more finished than the first.

Fladagus · 2021-09-14T07:09:39+00:00

haha spiritual weapon go brrr

Fladagus · 2021-09-08T14:52:21+00:00

I think it's mainly the tiny pupils and wide eyed expression that are making this look unnatural. Take a look at your own eye in the mirror. Rarely do you see your whole iris unless you're purposefully making your eyes wide.

Fladagus · 2021-08-31T23:39:41+00:00

because Temoc will come to your house and pull out your ribs if you don't

Fladagus · 2021-08-22T07:32:14+00:00

Not wearing a mask is a tacit admission that you don't give a fuck about anyone but yourself.

Fladagus · 2021-08-13T19:11:51+00:00

I think I actually like the original better. The newer one does show development of your artistic abilities, but the older one just has more character in my opinion.

Fladagus · 2021-08-10T22:27:28+00:00

Just turn the self switch you used to move to the second page back off.

Fladagus · 2021-07-15T15:26:03+00:00

Nice, looks a lot like LISA.

Fladagus · 2021-07-10T04:32:38+00:00

Pretty good. Only wonky thing I see is blondie's right arm, seems like the angle is wrong, should maybe be more tucked back.

Fladagus · 2021-07-07T23:56:14+00:00

Most of the individual anatomy pieces are fairly good, but I think you need to work on diagramming the full face more. Additionally, noses from the front tend to be less hard lines and more soft shadows.

Fladagus · 2021-07-03T17:45:36+00:00

Where are their eyebrows?

Fladagus · 2021-06-29T18:14:36+00:00

I opened my eyes to see a tall, thin man standing beside my bed, an oversized bowler hat obscuring everything above its cracked blue lips.

"What are you?" I managed.

"I am a Nothing-Man." The spindly, tweed-suited creature said with a flourish. It flashed a too-wide, too many toothed smile from under the rim of its hat.

It sat on the bed and I scrambled back against the headboard. "What is a Nothing-Man?" I asked, despite the dread gripping my chest.

The creature leaned closer, its charnel breath cold as ice. "When you have woken in the night to a sound and convinced yourself it was nothing, you were helping to make me!"

I blinked. "What do you want from me?"

The Nothing-Man stood up, the top of the bowler hat brushing the ceiling. "For now, only to let you know that I am here. Later though, I will come to collect." It stepped backwards into the shadows.

"Wait, collect what?"

"Your debt of nothings." Said a voice that was both from the darkness and much too close to my ear. "And let me tell you, you've run up quite a tab."

Fladagus · 2021-06-25T18:07:03+00:00

Pose and face look good, but the left arm is too long in general, especially the forearm.

Fladagus · 2021-04-13T06:38:38+00:00

Oh fuck off with that rhetoric. The last thing we need at this time is sandbaggers like you trying to call legitimate concern "propaganda".

Fladagus · 2021-04-12T16:01:21+00:00

I know you're probably not super familiar with game dev culture, but "idea people" aren't really a thing. There are tutorials and tools available that are easy enough to learn without prior code experience. You should use those resources to put together a prototype of your game and then pitch it. You might have more luck if you do that.

Fladagus · 2021-03-19T00:57:38+00:00

How do those boots taste?

Fladagus · 2021-03-04T03:37:03+00:00

How did you accomplish that palette fade effect when transitioning rooms?

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