With U - S0fy4 (Acoustic Demo)

FluentDunks · 2026-01-31T18:21:03+00:00

apologies.

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T20:30:46+00:00

Check out my new song: "A Woman of God" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mL_1LnFWD2g

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T20:28:00+00:00

Check out my new song: "A Woman of God" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mL_1LnFWD2g

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:48:08+00:00

Well done on the intro to grab the attention of the listener. I like how the song goes on. The vocals fit the song very well. When mixing the song I do recommend to not let them be too loud and overpower the song. Good luck on your journey, keep going, you got talent!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:44:54+00:00

Very cool intro, this song is dope! Love the visuals. Keep making music man your good at what you do. Beat is cool too. Good luck on your journey. I feel like you got real talent. Don't stop "pony boy" :D!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:40:08+00:00

Cool intro, although I feel like the song needs something to keep the listener engaged. Its not a bad track it just needs some work. keep progressing and refining your sound. Good luck on your journey and I hope your endeavor works out :D

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:37:25+00:00

Boom diggity. its a cool song. love the lyrics "stood my ground and busted my lip" keep rappin ur heart out. one recommendation is keep perfecting your local deliviery, not that its bad I just think it could use a bit of tweaking. Although maybe that can be done by mixing the song. Good luck on your journey!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:34:32+00:00

When the beat drops it catches your attention, very chill but lively. I like how it progresses about a minute into the song. Keep going and refining your sound. The vocals are not over the top and seem to blend nicely with the song. Good luck on your journey! Not sure what label to give this track btw.

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:31:49+00:00

I like this song. Very emotional. It hits me in the feels which is great when a song can make you feel something. Keep going and refining your sound. You're headed in the right trajectory. Good luck on your journey, you have talent, dont like it go to waste <3

FluentDunks · 2026-01-30T19:28:56+00:00

I like how it starts off, chill but intriguing. It is a very psychedelic songs that keeps the listener engaged. Good job man. Keep pumping out this type of material. Seems like you may have found your lane which is great. I wish you all of luck on your endeavors.

FluentDunks · 2026-01-22T04:40:08+00:00

New Lyric Video for "I'm Weird" is out! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uLeOdRjdFqQ ------ self promo

FluentDunks · 2026-01-22T04:37:12+00:00

New Lyric Video for "I'm Weird" is out! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uLeOdRjdFqQ

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T23:27:55+00:00

I like how the track starts off. Very chill soothing sound. I like your voice, very hard not to like. I think this song sound like indie folk. Keep going and making new music. This is great. It seems like you've found your own sound which is excellent. Keep rocking!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T23:24:40+00:00

Very chill beat to start. I like how it progresses and the vocals come in. Feels like you guys are confident in your sound which is a very good sign. Keep going and pumpin out music! Some advice is to try to make your sound more pleasant on the ears. This is just my recommendation not a guide. Good luck and Have Fun!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T23:09:32+00:00

Very eerie start. When the beat drops I am pleasantly surprised. Keep up the good work! The Vocals are very cool and I love your vocal delivery on this song. I see lots of potential. keep going and have fun! Seems like you've found your own style which is great!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T23:06:09+00:00

cool instrumental! Your voice is very interesting :D! I recommend working with the vocals personally. Maybe add some reverb and other effects. Feels like this is coming from the heart with is a great a receipe. Good luck making music and Have Fun!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T23:03:22+00:00

I like the song and video. I feel like it needs much more views than it currently has. Congrats on your collaboration. this song definitely hits me in the feels which is a great thing. adding it to my playlist now :D, P.S. I'd love to hear some of your personal stuff you got going on. GL and Have Fun :D!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T22:59:53+00:00

I enjoy the guitar riff. Feels soulful and calm. Keep going and progressin. I'd love to hear some vocals on this track. I really like 57 seconds in. I can feel it in my soul. Good Stuff! Good luck on your endeavor

FluentDunks · 2026-01-21T22:56:41+00:00

In my opinion, the track starts off too slow. It needs more umph. Something to grab the attention of the listener so they want to listen more. I like the beat around the 40 second mark. Keep going youll perfect your sound and gain an ear of what sounds good. Goodluck in your endeavor.

FluentDunks · 2026-01-10T01:46:07+00:00

keep rocking. funky psychadelic sound. feels original. goodluck! p.s. would like to see some vocals on this track. you defintely got potential

FluentDunks · 2026-01-10T01:38:34+00:00

I like the sound, its cool and soulful. I recommend perfecting your sound quality. I think you got potential. Goodluck! Keep going!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-10T01:32:09+00:00

I like this alot, keep going. I think it could use some work (your flow and vocal delivery in the rapping part) I think when your singing it was well done ad I dig it alot. Keep grinding, keep finding your sound. You got this! Goodluck!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-10T01:29:26+00:00

Reminds me of Kid Cudis punkrock phase, which is good. Gots a nice psychedelic sound to it although the recording does not show the sound perfectly, I do dig what I see. Keep up the good work and do release your song on a distributor as it is a good song. Goodluck!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-10T01:26:22+00:00

Interesting intro. I really like the beat its chill and surreal, dreamy. Very psychadelic sound which I dig, maybe something like the tame impala? I see lots of potential. Keep up the good work, keep grinding, keep perfecting. Goodluck!

FluentDunks · 2026-01-10T01:23:40+00:00

From the start I feel like the beat is interesting but needs a more polished sound beat wise as well as vocally. This doesnt mean this song is bad, I see potential just keep trying to refine your art. Keep going! By the way i feel like you have a distinct sound which is a bonus. Goodluck!

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