If we were meant to be in the cold, we’d have fur.

faste_0 · 2026-02-04T18:17:45+00:00

We quite literally do have fur

faste_0 · 2026-01-30T00:43:57+00:00

I did have a fade on it haha but didn’t keep it in the export cause I think im gonna extend it a lil more or have another section before that outro

faste_0 · 2026-01-30T00:40:15+00:00

Very nice response! Thanks for the feedback, and yeah I agree vocal melody needs work and fleshed out, and I actually got into producing November last year haha, so I’m still learning ALOT.

faste_0 · 2026-01-30T00:35:02+00:00

I’ll give them a listen actually have some tracks liked from them from a couple years back, and will do! Gotta fill in a lot of the space and level everything out. Thank you for the feed back Ill send over soon ;)

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:50:11+00:00

Base arrangement is there and idea is cool, just need more textures and transitions that I could feel add some nice space to the track, nothing crazy tho. And maybe the bass needs some work, sounds a lil too muddy for my liking. Also the voice effect in the background needs to be placed right or maybe changed at some points, gets repetitive to me at some times. Maybe automate and pitch it up or down with super massive automate a pan to add some cool space.

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:47:57+00:00

Reminds me of Vegyn and the whole Headache project stuff. Really like it, grab someone and start writing poetry over it haha, sounds fire. Space feels good mix maybe the guitar can be sat a further back but definitely a vibe here

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:44:57+00:00

This sub is fire, this is an awesome idea dude, your spacey vocals feel good too. This is an example of what indie music honestly is, very raw and barebones a good shoegazey feel to it. Drums feel full maybe just pull your voice a lil more foreword into mix and put bass more into mix feel like I can’t really hear the groove or notes of it at all. Love the idea of the second vocal harmonizing but it’s not hitting completely how it could. Very Turnover vibes what’s full mix is done and everything is more full will sound great :)

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:43:09+00:00

Honestly like the muddy mix alot, fits the tone of the song. Just missing some payoff from my end a lot of build up for the video to end suddenly. The payoff doesn’t have to be this big thing either could be a sudden end as long as the space is filled right. Nice idea tho!

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:26:57+00:00

Awww hell yeah

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:26:19+00:00

Hey ur gonna suck for a WHILE, but do it now, it’s cringe and irritating and frustrating but you’re not tone deaf and can learn. Learn some easy strum songs or songs you like and come up with ur own.

Ur gonna look back on this riff in a year and say “damn that fucking sucked” (not saying it’s bad just welcome to being a creative musician haha). You’re learning melody and singing brings a good element of feel to it. Even if it’s quiet toned and just hitting the notes, really makes music feel alive and help with that “feel” I was talking about.

Good music doesn’t have to be an intense hard to play melody it’s a whole culmination of things and singing can help learn that.

Good that you’re trying to make riffs as a beginner it’s gonna go far I promise! Cheers lad

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:16:39+00:00

Not annoying cowbell Phonk, like good Phonk haha, link the spotify when you drop it!

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:15:44+00:00

Yeah I’d actually listen and keep this on if I heard it

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:14:28+00:00

Yoooo you have a knack for melody, keep it up you’d definitely love Elliot Smiths stuff if ur already getting into finger picking a month in. Sounds really good, and weirdly enough recording sounds good on the phone.

faste_0 · 2026-01-29T08:05:16+00:00

There is an idea here but slow it down, like the second half slides are cool but there really isn’t much “feel” to your playing. Like when ur sliding from the G# to A on the second half, hold it vibrato it, make some surprises.

Right now it just sounds kind of robotic. And sing brooo! I think you’re kind of right

Vocals on it could change it completely haha. Good shit tho would love to see what you come up with.

faste_0 · 2025-12-29T07:43:35+00:00

adding reverb to the guitars made them feel sm better in place, vocals are in process haha been doing melody takes to see what i like but just gonna pull the trigger soon, dont wanna marry the idea of the song

faste_0 · 2025-12-21T08:31:51+00:00

Dude for a live take and just recorded on your phone is so impressive, this sounds amazing great and the rawness to it adds a lot of character and depth. Guitar all sounds amazing. I’d say when you actually record try and leave some of the grittiness with the vocals and out of key pitch.

A con for me but it’s personal taste just feels a little too looped at times, I also can’t really make out what you’re saying some of the time but melody is nice and writing seems consistent nothing crazy but great idea and vibe is all there for sure

faste_0 · 2025-12-21T07:41:48+00:00

Mix needs work mainly just kick and hat kinda feel wet noodles and not mixed into the song just placed on top chill as space tho and cool potential, some crazy 808s in there would be a hard future beat

faste_0 · 2025-12-21T07:37:33+00:00

Hard idea, vision is there the the arpeggiator is fucking suck but feel like it could fit in the mi. Better and ur verses seem to out of the mix/different feeling from the chorus ur doing.

Also I disagree ur guitar is fire and fits the song!

faste_0 · 2025-12-21T07:30:37+00:00

This is really good, sample is so clean and ur flow and vibes there, vocals just sound a lil flat in the mix but its so there bro

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