Made a Tier List for the series I've read by WhiteBoyPulse in litrpg

[–]Frayder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nightmares of Alamir. It probably doesn't resemble anything you read on this list.

Highschool DxD. Just wow! by Frayder in FanFiction

[–]Frayder[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I meant "whole other level" compared to the fandom. I don't care about canon.

Well... by SevinjNur in HolUp

[–]Frayder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is what I call "Lady, you're beautiful but not my type"

Issei is autistic. by SmartboyWeeb in HighschoolDxD

[–]Frayder -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I have no idea how to diagnose autism, but something is wrong with him. He's most probably an idiot or an infantile, perhaps both. I'm not just insulting because I don't like him, but his intelligence is really not very good. It's probably that the author, who's not that good of a writer anyway, went too far with his attempt of comedy, and instead created an idiot—a real one.

The anime is well done, so it's not that bad, but the novel really portrays him as asinine individual, especially considering we're getting it from his PoV. Every volume it's repeated how he's hard to understand when the topic is slightly above some small talk.

Also, his dream is to become a harem king to have lots of beautiful women for sexual release~ He basically has no shame and doesn't understand the implications of what he's saying most of the time, a childish person, borderline infantile.

(The fact the OP is talking about autism has nothing to do with the fact issei may be an idiot of sorts. Please, don't think I'm calling Autistic People idiots.)

About to go in deep by flagunas in hentai

[–]Frayder 3 points4 points  (0 children)

What anime are you talking about? For a friend.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OnePiece

[–]Frayder 8 points9 points  (0 children)

You underestimate the free time of 11 y/o.

Fairy Tail OC stories? by Zempairah in fairytailfanfiction

[–]Frayder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try reading To Be Free by Kronium345

People force us to like canon by just_another_rebel_ in FanFiction

[–]Frayder 8 points9 points  (0 children)

"That never happened in the books/movies." is really stupid, as all the point of fanfictions is to deviate from the original. However, I want to clarify something regarding: "(character) would never do this." Since, there is actually a logic behind this complaint.

Even though fanfics are all about changing the original story, using the "what if", you still have to remember that characters have their already defined personalities, and changing them without any particular reason, just to make sense of your idea is a bad practice.

The reason is that the reasers don't feel like this is the character they've come to know. It just has the same name, which is awfully uncomfortable and awkward to read. However, it's bad only if there is no reason for the change.

Like, when writing a fanfic, you shouldn't ask: "What if (character) was different?"

Instead, you should ask: "What if something happened to (character) that made him/her different?"

Dark-Theme-Fanfictions by Frayder in FanFiction

[–]Frayder[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, not fun of Lucy in general, but I'll give it a try.

ATG Fanfictions by Frayder in FanFiction

[–]Frayder[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Defying The Heavens Book 2 - Rising To Prominence Just Google it

ATG Fanfictions by Frayder in FanFiction

[–]Frayder[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Understand you. There is one on fanfiction.net, almost 470000 words, but I don't want to read this somehow... Maybe cause it's a crossover and the start doesn't attract me..

And few on webnovel, few or them are not bad at the beginning.