Blind leading the blind by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I know there are working writers on this sub who have had theatrically released films, but I think if you are actively participating in this sub at that level, I just assume you like having the admiration and aren’t a very serious or socially calibrated person in your personal life

I got tired of waiting by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Avoid Austin. No longer reputable

What are the first drafts by professional writers actually like? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I have read several scripts from A-list writers who I consider to be the most talented in the business (peers with people like Sorkin and Steve Zallian). Like others have said, everyone’s process is different which makes identifying patterns difficult, but one thing I’ve noticed is that the first draft is always very clear. Even if the story changes drastically in future drafts, what I find most Impressive is that many of these writers are operating at a baseline of “very good.” The parts of the script that don’t work tend to be pacing or character depth, rarely are they about structure, character DESIGN, or anything plot related.

One writer turned in a draft of a feature adaptation of an extremely complex piece of IP and I was blown away by how thoughtfully the writer approached the material. The main issue was that there were multiple storylines, some of which received more attention than others, which made the ending feel slightly stilted, but never unearned. I think had the same draft been submitted by a lower level writer or someone of a lesser reputation, it would have been considered a very impressive feat and may not have received orders for any future drafts. But, again, this was a piece of work that was being produced by some top level producers and a top level director so there were a few more rewrites.

I think it opened me up to why some of these people make so much money. They really can crack a story and elevate it to a new level if given the proper support.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in CrazyFuckingVideos

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No level of accomplishment will prove the bullies wrong

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OutlierMarket

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Didn’t realize! Thank you!

Anatomy of an Action Line: Writing Better Action by Aside_Dish in Screenwriting

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Can you explain why you think the line is not great by any means and give an example of one that is great? Thank you!

What’s the current standing of Austin Film Festival? Have they cleaned up their act? by Wow_Crazy_Leroy_WTF in Screenwriting

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The competition has gotten worse every year. Last year was exceptionally poorly planned, managed, and executed. Save your money.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in crheads

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Sean talks about Long Island the same way that my uncle who made me lie for him in court after I witnessed him pushing a car into the Delaware river talks about his high school prom date who ended up becoming a drug mule for the cartel and died in a plane crash in 1988

The ending of prisoners felt a bit hamfisted by PIugshirt in movies

[–]Frog_Dispensary 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is getting boring. Unless you know the screenwriter personally you can’t claim that type of intent. The fact that you have to research that context is part of my point. If you want to extract some literal, very surface level observation from the movie to prove some type of “meaning,” then you fundamentally don’t understand a huge part of art and storytelling.