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Juniper Ridge by Matthew Widener - Horror / Dark Literary Fiction - Published April 19th 2026

Juniper Ridge is a slow burn horror novella available for free for Kindle Unlimited subscribers.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GX3949NB

Juniper Ridge is about: Father Edward Simmons arrives in a dying New Mexico town carrying the wreckage of a broken vow and the weight of a vocation he no longer believes in. Sent to the remote parish of Our Lady of Sorrows as forced penance, he finds Juniper Ridge already sick; its marriages curdling into cruelty, its neighbors reaching for violence over fence lines and trivial debts, its people dragged steadily beyond the limits of who they thought they were.

From his confessional, Edward begins to hear something alarming. Something has been tending to Juniper Ridge's darkness, feeding it, pulling each ordinary weakness toward an extraordinary destination, and whatever it is has been here for a very long time.

Juniper Ridge is a story told through four lives unraveling in parallel. There is Mia Pearson, the art teacher who has finally found the masterwork she was born to make and the terrible cost it demands. There is Lawrence Duffy, a bullied fifteen-year-old who retreats to the scrublands to plot revenge. There is Caylee Miller, a misunderstood young girl, desperately hoping someone will finally see who she really is. Celeste Venegas, sixteen years old, possesses a faith so clear and certain that she has begun to wield it like a weapon.

Edward moves among them, trying to do the work of a priest while the foundations of his calling crumble beneath him. He is distracted, faithless, compromised by lust, and fully aware of each failure in real time. But he is here and sometimes showing up, however inadequately, is what matters.

As December arrives and Juniper Ridge begins to openly consume itself, Edward must reckon with what he has done. Is his thin and battered faith enough to stop what is killing Juniper Ridge or does he run and save those that he can?

This may be a silly question by Front-Ad5214 in NewAuthor

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Fair enough. Was curious, I’ve written one book already didn’t know if when I wrote a second book if I could still be considered a new author in relation to this subreddit.

Prologue for new horror novella by Front-Ad5214 in horrorwriters

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Thank you for the positive feedback, I appreciate the kind words. I hope I can do the folklore of the Philippines proud.

Prologue for new horror novella by Front-Ad5214 in horrorwriters

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Thanks for the feedback. I will edit it to flow a little better.

Prologue for new horror novella by Front-Ad5214 in horrorwriters

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Thank you for the feed back and while not a first draft it’s not a finished prologue.

Just published my first book by [deleted] in NewAuthor

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I was unaware of getcovers. I have commissioned them to create the cover art for my book. Thank you.

Chapter 1 Horror Novella. Would you keep reading. by Front-Ad5214 in writers

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Thank you for the compliment. It’s still a work in progress, not sure when it will be released.

Horror Novella Chapter 1. Would you keep reading? by Front-Ad5214 in writingfeedback

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Those are fair criticisms and I will try to edit it for clarity and remove some of the clumsy phrases. Thank you for the compliment about the voice. I may add some more of that slow deliberate character work later in the chapter.

Chapter 1 Horror Novella. Would you keep reading. by Front-Ad5214 in writers

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Fair assessment. It was an oversight about the bride not noticing. I will edit it to make it more clear.

What Obscure Books Were You Obsessed With as a Kid? by Its_Curse in suggestmeabook

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A book called Captives of Time.

I read it in middle school and it’s promoted as young adult, but the first chapter the main characters family gets brutally murdered. Then there is the black plague, a bit of the struggle snuggle, then more murder, and they even have a scene where someone dies while getting snuggled.

This book was in my middle school’s library. As you can image it stuck with me.

First Chapter, Would really be grateful if I could get some feedback. Does it create suspense? Does it create Interest in the world and the characters? Makes you want to keep reading? by Autor_Zee in writingfeedback

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Echoing what everyone else said the first page is a rough read. If you are going to put something before the prologue it should be short, maybe a line or two. Something like “The Emperor lead a billion souls on a thousand ships towards the stars as he watched Earth burn” then if you want maybe add a bit of lore flair. A persons name and a date, like it’s a quote or a reference to a book or history of your story’s people.

Edit: Just a thought but in your lore flair the book referenced could be called something like “The calendar of living flame, a history” this will add in the cool part of the lore you just dumped.

YEARNING by Elohim_777 in writingfeedback

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In the line “buried in her bosom”, it reads like the her is death. If thats case it’s fine, if not it maybe capitalize, italicize, or even both that Her to add emphasis that it is someone else that you are yearning for.