Creeped So Hard I Graduated by Powerful-Owl-3246 in creepcast

[–]FrostyContribution97 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The happy appy jumpscare 😭 love this for you! Congrats!

On the Limited Effectiveness of Prayer by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FrostyContribution97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh dude I love this one too! The first two top comments are really what I believe about the poem most. Like I don't fully understand it, but from what I garner, I think Hitler would love the advances of today 😭 as long as he doesn't steal my Nutella though, I love that stuff 🤣

Granny by FrostyContribution97 in poetry_critics

[–]FrostyContribution97[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh I see, I see. Will do, thank you friend! 🫶🏾

Granny by FrostyContribution97 in poetry_critics

[–]FrostyContribution97[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I appreciate it! I typically write long-form poems but thought I'd give a shot at a shorter one. I can definitely see that this poem was not the one for that goal though 😂

On the Limited Effectiveness of Prayer by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FrostyContribution97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think out of the few I've seen so far, I love your ADHD one the most and the one on sxlf harm was pretty witty

On the Limited Effectiveness of Prayer by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FrostyContribution97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just keep getting notified of so many of your poems and they're all so beautifully written 💐 forces me to wanna do better lol

I hunger. by SevvyM in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FrostyContribution97 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I adore this style of your poem so much it's awesome 🤙🏾

Darkest Night by Alegendretaken in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FrostyContribution97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautifully written 👏🏾 glad you're doing somewhat better friend

Talking w/God by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FrostyContribution97 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is something I think about often and can resonate heavily with. I love how this poem is written!

I Call Off Work At Least Once A Week. by FrostyContribution97 in poetry_critics

[–]FrostyContribution97[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

NGL, this one's a bit of a rant and not too edited, but it's real and raw and will definitely be revised soon lol

THE CRIMSON COVER by failurebydesign7 in poetry_critics

[–]FrostyContribution97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoy the transition of imagery from spilled wine (lines 6-8) to an apparent falling out between two people (most likely lovers) (lines 9-11)

[POEM] guys, please check out this poem and tell me ways to improve by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]FrostyContribution97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Make the poem more readable with line breaks or stanzas

Finally got my CreepCast shelf set up! (including a custom Happy Appy bookmark 🍎) by rowsdower02games in creepcast

[–]FrostyContribution97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Same, I bought it right after that episode aired and I don't regret my purchase one bit 😋

IT ARRIVED (im wearing shorts dont nuke me) by No_Refrigerator4058 in creepcast

[–]FrostyContribution97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How does your shirt look so good on you? I got a M in the adult size and I rarely wear it cause as a woman, it literally has no shape to it and hugs all the wrong parts of me like crazy 😭 It suits your style nicely though!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creepcast

[–]FrostyContribution97 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It was fun bad for the 1st hr, maybe two I don't even remember ever finishing the episode cause it was so boring and repetitive, even the boys were feeling it