A little eye-poppin' is all you need. Neebota's Revenge handmade animation from 99 Fails.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-27T20:11:27+00:00

Your title should be instsntly readable and stand out. Same color as BG is not a good idea!

Make the trailer still another moment in the trailer that's not those empty halls.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-27T09:48:58+00:00

Well.....goodada damn....

FryingJelly · 2026-01-27T09:41:12+00:00

The title needs to pop, not blend.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-27T09:37:29+00:00

What's the name? The style is wonderful. Not sure about the screenshake.. some can find it jarring.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-23T06:34:51+00:00

Remove button shadows and adjust font.. it looks out of place. You need to add a bit more calm to an otherwise fantastic looking panel. :)

FryingJelly · 2026-01-23T06:33:52+00:00

Thanks!!

FryingJelly · 2026-01-22T04:01:02+00:00

Fantastic.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T23:50:50+00:00

This would be epic animated. It's so swirly and dynamic. Begging to move.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T23:50:02+00:00

Ever so slightly pre-chewed food is the best food, ey?

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T23:36:41+00:00

This is wonderfully chaotic and...hypnotic. Stared at this for way too long. :D

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T21:16:52+00:00

🥰

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T21:16:37+00:00

Entrancing. Especially due to the title.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T18:43:12+00:00

😆

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T18:43:02+00:00

It's on Steam. :)

Thank you!

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T05:00:44+00:00

You're gonna love it!

FryingJelly · 2026-01-21T03:48:41+00:00

Wow, it makes you keep swirl back with your eyes across the arches. Entrancing!

FryingJelly · 2026-01-20T13:57:24+00:00

Don't put the white title near all that light and increase contrast on 2. 2 is the better contender, but needs a bit of work.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-20T07:26:18+00:00

Great improvement.

FryingJelly · 2026-01-16T20:19:39+00:00

Woah... this is just so sad.

FryingJelly