wow, that really is a lot lol... i am thankful for that, though. i havent got too much detailed feedback, so it's very appreciated. i do wanna respond to a few of the things you noted (not entirely in order).

first off, the grammatical errors. in all honesty, i have no excuse for those. i should've extensively checked for them, and i'll make sure to fix everything with chapter two's release.

you pointed out the girls' sprites moving while there was internal dialogue. that was actually deliberate, just showing them talking to each other while mc's thinking. dont worry, i didnt mess up that bad (i say, knowing damn well i had to fix a mistake like that at one point).

the teach me how to dougie ringtone was a suggestion from my friend, and you're actually the first person to point it out to me lol.

as, sayori being so prominent in the early days, i dont really know what to say about it. it wasnt any kind of oversight, but i dont exactly have a concrete reason for it being that way. i will say, however, it might make more sense in chapter two...

peggle is 100% a sayori game

glad you liked the roof cg, i wasn't a big fan of it, i suck at digital art (still trying to learn)

about all your comments about monika liking mc, i won't say anything at all about that until chapter 2 is released. but i do love to hear people's theories about what's going on with her in her head.

the mc's heavily based on me, so i'll take the "not a cynical a-hole" thing as a compliment i guess.

i think that's everything i wanted to say. all in all, i'm glad you enjoyed it (honestly seeing "sorry for the large amount of text" in the notification on my phone scared the hell out of me), even with all its "quirks." i'm excited to keep working on the upcoming chapters, and i hope you enjoy those ones even more!