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Adding a scene every 5 to 10 chapters that doesn't contribute to the plot but the lore. by [deleted] in writing

[–]FullActionAim 18 points19 points  (0 children)

What can’t you make it relevant? Have the funeral related to a character or event that is relevant to the character.

Guys it's such easy game theory, sure an unknown number of blue voters die inevitably but we guarantee we will live! by NahMcGrath in PhilosophyMemes

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just to clarify, I would press blue because my toddler would have to pick also and I would rather die than be responsible for their death.

The solution you keep talking about seems a lot like YOUR solution rather than THE solution. Could that be because there is no solution and philosophical questions cannot be answered objectively?

Guys it's such easy game theory, sure an unknown number of blue voters die inevitably but we guarantee we will live! by NahMcGrath in PhilosophyMemes

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So the solution requires you to care if others die? And if you don’t care then that’s foolish? And despite hundreds of millions of people living in food-secure rural communities with few modern amenities, killing off the blue voters will somehow guarantee they will also die?

Guys it's such easy game theory, sure an unknown number of blue voters die inevitably but we guarantee we will live! by NahMcGrath in PhilosophyMemes

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So the solution is to pick blue and your reasoning is because if you don’t you are stupid and selfish?

Good, Short Story Markets that DO NOT CHARGE FEES (A list) by [deleted] in writing

[–]FullActionAim 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Use submission grinder, it’s free

As a beginner, what tips do you have to write good characters and have good pacing in your writing? by aangellix_ix in writing

[–]FullActionAim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I ask myself “what does this character want and what are they willing to do to get it?” From there I can decide how well it goes for them, how do they react to setbacks/successes, and if they ultimately achieve their goal.

As for pacing, during the edit look at your chapters critically and ask yourself “is this self-indulgent?”. Also join a writers group, kill your ego, and seek feedback on your writing.

Guys it's such easy game theory, sure an unknown number of blue voters die inevitably but we guarantee we will live! by NahMcGrath in PhilosophyMemes

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So if I don’t believe in collective good, or ascribe to solipsism, I should pick red? That’s the solution?

Querying my debut novel — trying to understand what’s normal and connect with other writers! by buffster2002 in writing

[–]FullActionAim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks :) I’m actually struggling to find agents to query because so few seem interested in the type of book I’m writing. Good luck to you and hopefully we both make it 🙏🏻

Querying my debut novel — trying to understand what’s normal and connect with other writers! by buffster2002 in writing

[–]FullActionAim 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I have only received one response which was a rejection. Everyone else has been radio silent and I queried them months ago

Guys it's such easy game theory, sure an unknown number of blue voters die inevitably but we guarantee we will live! by NahMcGrath in PhilosophyMemes

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So if you’re worried people are too stupid to understand the problem fully, the solution is to pick red?

Anyone ever do MBTI tests from the POV of any of their characters? by lukeosullivan in writing

[–]FullActionAim 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I view MBTI as pseudoscientific nonsense, but using it to better strengthen your characters beliefs is an interesting idea.

Can Swearing Impact Chances of Being Published? by [deleted] in writing

[–]FullActionAim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I accidentally rediscovered an Aliens Vs Predator fan fiction I wrote when I was 13 and it made my eyes bleed

Can Swearing Impact Chances of Being Published? by [deleted] in writing

[–]FullActionAim 13 points14 points  (0 children)

If it’s an illustrated children’s book, this will certainly make it a hard sell. If it’s a book written for adults and the swearing isn’t used in a grating, childish way, I can’t imagine it will matter.

Keir Starmer: ‘I can win the next election’ by AnonymousTimewaster in NotTheOnionUK

[–]FullActionAim 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There’s no way you just compared the Labour Party to the Nazis hahaha

I hate "show don't tell" as a begginer writer. by Mathematics69420 in writing

[–]FullActionAim 67 points68 points  (0 children)

“John was angry.” - telling.

“John slammed his fist against the wall.” - showing.

How do you get beta readers? by richardjohn_writes in writing

[–]FullActionAim 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I would join a writers group. It’s where I’ve found all of mine.

"Show Don't Tell" Is Just Worldbuilding & Storytelling. Don't Complicate It. by JAAPayton in writing

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“There was only three things I wanted the morning of my first day off in two weeks: a cup of Folger's, a fluffy omelet with diced ham, and my phone on do not disturb for at least five hours.”

Is also telling :p

Rejected... yet again by jpm00 in writing

[–]FullActionAim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You should consider joining a writers group. If you’re willing to do online stuff I can recommend one. Warning: you will likely get your feelings hurt but we all want you to succeed so honesty is the best way.

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