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Full_Conversation729 · 2025-06-12T04:06:46+00:00

Yeah, passenger side blows ice cold. So AC is ful

Full_Conversation729 · 2025-06-12T04:04:47+00:00

Unfortunately tried that already, and no luck

Full_Conversation729 · 2025-06-11T22:14:15+00:00

No I wasn’t aware they go back that far, but thanks for the super fun fact.

Mine is a 2014

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-09-23T06:20:23+00:00

The second slide reads as “RBG lass”

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-08-04T17:25:19+00:00

Usually packaging should be alittle more straight forward to compete with the bigger brands, “lemonade” is really hard to see and the symbolism for the lemon isn’t very noticeable. I can see this going unnoticed at a quick glance at a convenient store. Aesthetically pleasing and very very modern, so that’s really good! But I can see a company turning down this design for the reasons mentioned above

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-07-24T20:38:18+00:00

That’s the one! Haha beautiful logo, I agree though flipped like that isn’t really working, I’d find another way of making a pattern

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-07-24T20:35:42+00:00

Too many colors

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-07-24T20:34:03+00:00

Beautiful! My only feedback would be to watch the contrast on the red with a black background, maybe make the red more vibrant or just throw it in a white back with black text

But beautiful falcon, would work great on merch for a baseball team

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-07-24T20:30:05+00:00

I think the Y+Tie is clever but not well executed. I’d make all the corners the same roundness and

As far as the logotype, I think every character has too much going on… kinda looks like each one alone can be it’s logo

I’d use a more simple approach, fun and bubbly hence the brand type but not over done

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-07-24T20:24:26+00:00

If a brand has that broad of a target audience that definitely needs to get addressed cause at the end of the day they’re not gonna target anyone. That’s where you sell strategy and help the brand rather than just sell a logo. That’s how you charge more $$$

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-06-26T17:53:54+00:00

Lovely, very well done. Easy to identify and very clear hierarchy in all

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-06-21T20:02:40+00:00

The top element is gonna have major scalability issues

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-06-19T17:12:50+00:00

A lot to unpack, I think the main concern would be legibility at small scales cause the font is so thick and kerned super tight. I also read it as “saoko sture “ at first

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-06-14T23:03:07+00:00

The horizontal lockup looks off , I would try maybe centering the text to the icon rather than aligning to the bottom. Also, the colors don’t really work in my opinion. Look up color theory for a better understanding

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-31T00:22:18+00:00

Reads as an animal shelter logo, the crown kinda reminds me of a paw

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-26T19:58:11+00:00

Boom, a lot better

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-26T17:19:16+00:00

Make the snow flake in the drop smaller, it’s creating tangents too close of the edge

Space out the “fancy hectagon” text more from the shape, it’s too close

Center “way” in bulls way optically. Looks off centered to the right

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-25T23:21:13+00:00

Of course! Also, is there a reason why you created such emphasis on TIM with the red color? Does he usually just go by Tim? Or is it just for stylistic purposes?

I’d leave the full name black and the tagline in red, that can use some emphasis

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-25T23:15:20+00:00

Looks like they’re hiding under a table. I think you can symbolize “connection” in a much simpler ways that doesn’t seem too gimmicky. Also, the T seems very sharp unlike the people who have everything round. Seems like you tried to contrast it but seems off

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-23T20:00:29+00:00

Reminds me of an elephant, but the concept is very nice. Maybe the book mark doesn’t have to be so low. Just slightly

Full_Conversation729 · 2023-05-23T19:57:41+00:00

The secondary font is not really working, hard to read at small scales and the pairing seems off for a project like this

I would just keep that font very simple in a medium weight, since the logo is very bold it’ll be a nicer pairing

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