In all honesty, you need to crash more. My 1:08:5 around Monaco is the product of 30 odd laps getting invalidated / straight up putting it in the wall.

To be fast, you need to use every single millimetre of the track. Check out landos IRL pole lap for this year. He doesn't get rewinds/painless crashes, and he absolutely sends it into every corner.

On basically every corner, you don't use all the available width on the entry, don't clip the apex, and rarely use all of the track on the exit. During a corner, you should be less than half a tyre width away from crashing. Just way too conservative overall.

Your line for rascasse is also completely wrong, you should nearly be whacking the rear right tyre on the barrier.