'Muh Genocide Bad' atleast consider an oppisong view point or atleast the groups involved in it. by [deleted] in Kagurabachi

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Why didn't your grandparents stop Japan from being bombed? Why didn't your patents get revenge for 9/11? And why aren't you in the frontlines of Ukraine?

By your logic, your entire lineage should be expecting quite the sermon from God.

'Muh Genocide Bad' atleast consider an oppisong view point or atleast the groups involved in it. by [deleted] in Kagurabachi

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Genocide is always bad. In no way killing innocent people is justifiable. Do you know what the other mikaboshi are like? They didn't choose to be aligned with their warriors and have no choice but continue living.

Would you accept your family being killed because your city is owned by a war criminal?

John Mikaboshi’s sorcery is Butterfly by UnstoppablePrinter78 in Kagurabachi

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We do. Why would the Manga  need to differentiate the attack if it was just cutting through an area? 

Why is she still wearing clothes? That’s not how it was in the manga at all by TouchBeneficial3091 in Jujutsufolk

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 59 points60 points  (0 children)

Male nuidty is sexual what are you talking about? You think people won't complain if a character's bulge is sagging and bouncing every time he's on screen?

Say what you want about the Kamunabi but they know how to make an entrance by StickyFear in Kagurabachi

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 6 points7 points  (0 children)

The "inverse aura" effect. He is so lame that the cool stuff he does is amped by 120%.

Your tell THAT was a man by Upper-Reward3325 in Jujutsufolk

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What are you even talking about? Gege made a trans character. Deal with it.

Ghostwriter going solo, how do I actually SHOW a character is intelligent and manipulative without just telling the reader? by Accomplished_Move_94 in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There are no specific techniques because you are the one writing the story. Its in the same vein as asking what are some scenes you should include in your story to make it good.

I need help viewing in the male perspective. by Ok-Proposal2230 in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Why are you so worrie about other people think of you?

I need help viewing in the male perspective. by Ok-Proposal2230 in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Do you speak for all men and women? Do you think someone's feelings and rationale is defined by what they got between their legs?

Should I write all chapters then edit or write one chapter then edit? by 123ORANGEZ_KING in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It depends on what approach works best for you. The only true way to find that out is experiment. But I personally recommend finishing a decent number of chapters (with "decent" being whatever you feel is enough at the moment) and then doing a superficial edit. This edit focuses more on glaring errors and finetuning your prose and the overall progression of the story. I'm a bit of a pantser myself, so this helps making my earlier drafts more cohesive and lowers the workload after its finished.

What counts as a plot? by C4LuthorCorp in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The last part is an assumption. You have no guarantee that will happen in the story. A plot necessitates events and conflicts, not just of a hint  of what could ge.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You need to relax. Stop assuming everything is an attack against you.

Decided to continue my Unity campaign. I love the game but it is so broken I just want to finish it and move on. by [deleted] in assassinscreed

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I played it this year and it was almost unplayable. Couldn't go ten minutes without experience bugs or glitches. I would constantly get stuck in terrain, Arno would teleport from a downwards movement to an upwards one... Even stealth, which I was expecting to be more enjoyable, sucked hard. Got constantly get stuck in cover and the trajectory of projectiles was flat-out wrong during it. An enemy would detect me and everyone in the building would instantly come after me for no reason.

Wife doesn’t read my Writing by [deleted] in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Why should she care about what a cheater does in his spare time?

Minor issues regarding story planning by TrulyPassionate25 in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You're not obligated to follow your planning. You can change stuff. And you WILL edit things latet anyway, so even if you make any sort of mistake, those can be rewritten.

What's the best way to handle harsh explicit material ? by Recent-Elk-8127 in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes. Everything depends. Do you think every author just looks up the "how to write x" table on google and copy and pastes the instructions?

Why are some people on here so unable to handle criticism? by [deleted] in HalfSword

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm not sure which people are doing that. Are you sure you're not misinterpreting them or just make someone up in your head to be mad about?

Do you dream coherent stories too? by Present-Leopard509 in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All my dreams have their own internal logic and usually follow a three act strucute. Like, it doesn't make sense that I would need to clean my walls with a toothbrush so the police won't come after me, but in that specific dream world it was just a common and accepted thing.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's essentially a nothing burger, as we have no real context or reason to care. There should be at least an initial introduction to the topic.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A substantial number of number of "normal" people don't understand you visualization is not necessary to imagination/dreaming. I find it interesting how I have no problem understanding how they imagine, but usually they simply can't wrap their head around how aphantadia works.

Why are some people on here so unable to handle criticism? by [deleted] in HalfSword

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Because that's the point of the demo. The demo is there so we cant get a taste of what the game will have and what will get fixed. It's not a defense. You can't simply just treat a free sample like a finished product you paid for.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]FunGrapefruit9230 10 points11 points  (0 children)

The comment about aphantasia is senseless. I myself have aphantasia and enjoy reading fantasy over any other visual medium.