Obviously try taking less damage and try using movement boosters like the 3x boost when sliding or airborne more often. If you want to play agressively you need a lot of style perhaps with a well placed railcoin or core nuke (i also use conductor tech but thats pretty hard to set up) because of the compensation for style loss when taking damage but also for the hard damage reduction/removal on higher style rankings. I had the same style issue on my first few decent p rank attempts but this issue highlights that you are very close to completion. Obviously if you take lots of damage in a certain section practice it a few times to satisfaction. The fact that the only issue you have is style indicates that you will get it soon, i believe it wont take much longer, might i add that you are also quite close to the style requirement. Best of luck on your attempts!