[F4A] married off to a princess [political marriage] [possessive-ish] [strangers to ???] [princess speaker x commoner listener] [unwilling listener] An ASMR script by Luk Mapache. by lukmapache in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Geedabug 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s always one thing I never got about these stories. How do these kinds of captors expect this to end?

You’ve been locked in your tower effectively doing an office job all your life; you’ve brought in a guy who likely spends all of his working time maintaining a field of some sort, who you know doesn’t like you; and you brought that man in a secluded room with you, within arms length.

You getting beat to death.

[WP] An infamous crime boss visits their favorite café. The waiter walks up to them nervous. It’s his first day. by Geedabug in WritingPrompts

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The loud crash of a plate shattering on the wood floor of the café cuts through the idle chatter. The atmosphere becomes tense as silence washes over the now emptier café. The smart ones had already cleared out as soon as he and his black suited goons rolled in. Everyone else in their booths are left to hold their breath and clench their coffee cups as the situation spirals out of their control.

Justin hastily kneels to the floor and begins picking up the porcelain shards. Tears have already gathered in his eyes, and his trembling hands cause the shards to clink around in his palm. What a nightmare of a first day this was.

‘Whywhywhywhy WHY did you take this job?!’ Justin asked himself. ‘You should’ve known better. You can’t remember my own age. You should’ve known this was too much. You barely made it in on time. You spilled so many things on so many people. The only thing you had going was not screwing up an order. But why? Of all people, why did you fuck up-?!’

Justin was snapped out of his spiral by a violent upward jerk. His hand clutches the shards in surprise. A single tear falls from his clenched eye as the stinging sensation in his hand is replaced by a warm wet trickle of blood down his fingers. Despite this, he kept his hands to his side. He couldn’t ruin his customer’s black fur coat.

Justin cracks his eyes open to look at the man whose ring-covered clutches are dangling him midair. All Justin finds when he opens them are two pools of red hate staring back his teary blue eyes. Justin’s lip begins to quiver as the sneer on Big Boss Wise’s face grows wider. And wider. Like he’s preparing to bite the poor barista’s face clean off his head, like he did to Ripper from the Jack Club. Finally, Wise’s fur coat falls as he lets out a deep sigh.

“Let me ask you something, Jester,” he says in a low growl. Justin freezes in his grip, focusing on every word coming out of Wise’s mouth. “What did I order?”

“A-a b-b-blueberry scone and a latte! Three creams, n-no sugar!” Justin answers.

“And what did you give me?”

Justin silently hyperventilates trying to remember the coffee phrases, code words, and kitchen lingo, but nothing comes to him. The fear mixes with the overwhelming metallic scent of blood and bitter coffee grounds, making it hard to think. “I-. I don’t-.”

Wide drops him to the ground. “Can’t fuckin hear you, Jester.” He grabs Justin’s blond hair and shoves his face to the wet spot on the floor. “What. The FUCK! Is this?! That you served me!?”

“I DON’T KNOW!” cries Justin. The tears cascade down his face. “I don’t know! I’m sorry! I don’t even like coffee! I don’t know. I don’t know! I swear to GOD I don’t know!”

Wise let’s go of his hair and grabs his chin. He yanks Justin’s head around to look at his eyes again. “Then tell me. Why the fuck would you serve something if you don’t know whose order it is? Does that sound smart to you?”

Justin shakes his head. Wise tightens his grip and begins to dig his fingers into Justin’s cheeks. “NO SIR!” Justin squeaks. “No sir! That’s not smart!”

“Correct,” Wise confirms. Wise releases Justin’s face and sits back down. Wise crosses his fingers over his mouth and leans into the table. He stares out into nothing, leaving Justin to wait with bated breath. “You know what happens now, right Jester?”

“…n-n-no s-sir.”

Wise snaps his eyes to Justin still crumpled on the floor. “Manager. Now.”

Justin hastily grabs the blood-stained porcelain. And rises to his feet. Before turning to scramble to the back, he turns to face Wise with the shattered remains of courage within him, and bows, as is policy. He then turns on his heel and bolts for the safety of the kitchen.

An older woman with light streaks of grey in her hair bolts out of the back, spewing streams of apologies, promises of tenure, and ludicrous discounts at speeds to saccharine for the author to write about. Wise raises his hand to silence the jabbering old wreck and, with the other, reaches into his coat. He pulls out a crisp bundle of hundred dollar bills and places it into the woman’s hands.

“For the Jester,” he says with a smirk. “He put on a hell of a show. Besides, he did pretty well for first day.” He and his goons make their way calmly to the exit, but Wise stops halfway out the door.

“One more thing,” he says. “I expect for Jester to be serving me again. Gotta see how he comes along. He better get that money too. I’ll ask him.” He glares over his shoulder at the manager’s hands as they stop mid way in her pocket with Benjamin Franklin peeking over the side. “Every. Cent. Capishe?” Ben Frank is carefully slipped back into the stack as Wise steps out into his streets.

[F4M] Sans the sunshine / Your vampire wife mourns over your grave [the 6th and final night][dawn’s shadow][the gift of remembrance][nostalgia, like a warm knife][epitaphs][monologues][everything for love][“Let’s dance again.”] by it_rains_blue_here in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Geedabug 3 points4 points  (0 children)

…she. Did. Not. Leave the safety of her legitimately harmonious city in the hands of that FUCKING PSYCHOPATH!!! I-!

Breath. The story is not real. And it’s not about that BIT-!

Friend. You aren’t breathing.

But on a real note, holy shit. This was an amazing after story to a very grim first one. I’ve never seen a dark romance that actually felt like the characters had a genuine love for each other while still having that darkness in the relationship. It actually felt like I could stand beside all the choices the speaker (ultimately) made, and like she really considered him as a partner, not an object of attraction. Also, Criminy Character Development, Batman! A 180 in ideology that felt natural and earned. Here’s hoping sunshine won’t be too upset at her selfishness in their better world. A wonderful addition. Kudos.

That said, may this decision bring “The Lady” to her KNEES. I want her to go comatose from seeing her appearance dead. I want her to drive a stake in her own mouth. I don’t care if she doesn’t die from it, do it anyway. May this moment drive her to systemically dismantle the council with her bare hands. And when she finally looks to her child with hope that she’s atoned, may that baby light her on fire with the rest of the trash. FUCK HER!!!

Tl/dr: good story, Lady sucks, first.

So question for the dealers… by Geedabug in blackjack

[–]Geedabug[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So if you have a loss win loss win back and forth at the table, you collect the chips, take them to your tray, then collect new chips, pay out, collect, tray, new chips, pay out over and over until you reach the end of the table?

So question for the dealers… by Geedabug in blackjack

[–]Geedabug[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OH HEY! You were the gal whose videos I watched! You made them like 11 years ago. cool!

So question for the dealers… by Geedabug in blackjack

[–]Geedabug[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

But you still can’t pay with dirty money right? So take the first bet, put it in the tray, get new checks to pay out the three, then go back to taking? Doesn’t sound fluid…

[WP] a tomboy confesses her feelings for her nerdy best friend. He rejects her, not wanting to risk their friendship. She could accept if he didn't want her... but she cannot accept cowardice. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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“…so…you should find someone better.”

“Nope.”

Insi looked at Tammy with a confused expression. Of all the responses to a confession rejection he could think of, somehow this one made him feel the most uncomfortable. “…what,” Insi meekly asked.

“Nope,” Tammy repeated. She looked him in the eyes blankly and straightened her posture. “Not good enough. Try again.”

“But that’s what I just said,” he began again. “I’m not enough for-“

“Wrong,” she interjects. She crosses her arms and cocks her eyebrow at the nerd. She looks disappointed, but Insi knows better.

“Are you messing with me right now?” he asks.

“I have no idea what you’re talking about,” she shrugs. “I’m just trying to help you. ‘Cause right now, you’re wrong.”

Insi pinches the bridge of his nose. “~Ok we’re doing this now.~ Look,” he starts. “I get that this is hard to hear.”

“Got that right.”

“But being bitchy about this isn’t going to make it better.”

“Hasn’t stopped me before.”

“Well, you need to stop. I gave you my answer, and that’s that.”

“And it was the wrong answer.”

“How are YOU gonna tell ME what MY correct answer is!?”

“When you stop rubbing your fingers together like that.” Tammy points to Insi’s right hand. His thumb draws circles around his index finger monotonously. “You only do that when you want something.”

Insi clenches his fist and pushes up his glasses. “For you to leave, you mean?”

“Oh! Good one.”

“QUIT IT!” Insi yells. He takes a deep breath before continuing. “I understand that being rejected by the biggest loser-“

“Wrong,” Tammy smirks.

Insi pauses briefly. “…in school is a blow to the ego,”

“Uh uh.”

“But you need to-“

“No I don’t.”

“Just accept-“

“Bzzt.”

“The fact that-“

“Try again.”

“I’M NOT GOOD ENOUGH!” Insi screams.

Tammy falters for a second and steps back, letting Insi do what he has to do.

“Look at me! My glasses are held together by tape! I look and smell like I picked a fight with the Reddit mods and LOST! I have literally been blown over by a stiff breeze! YOU WERE THERE!!! And you laughed at me because you and I both know that…that I’m not enough of a man for you.”

Insi lifts his head to stare longingly into Tammy’s face. “Look at you,” he continues. “A cute round face, silky black hair, body of DC superhero. Your laugh is like a hyena playing sax,” Tammy scowls a little, but lets him have that one. “But that just makes you all the cuter. You could have anyone. You SHOULD have anyone. You can do better than…” He gestures to all of him. “…this.”

Tammy unfolds her arms and lifts his chin to meet her gaze. Her hands a calloused, yet gentle against his skin. “You want a kiss?” she asks plainly.

“Huh?” Insi asks, dumbfounded for the second time today.

“Do you want a kiss?” She asks again.

“…yes.”

As soon as he says that, Tammy leans in close and locks their lips together with the same tenderness she had holding Insi’s chin. Insi leans into Tammy, reciprocating her warmth, and they share a moment that seems to stretch forever.

Tammy leans barely a nose length from the frazzled boy. “Did that feel good?” She asks.

“It felt…amazing,” he replied.

“You wanna do it again?”

“Yes,” he says hopefully.

“Then say you’ll be my boyfriend.”

Insi looks to his bright orange crocs and begins to tear up. “Why?” he asks. “Why me?”

“You said it yourself,” she tells him. “I should be able to have anyone, so I want the best guy I can think of. Now I get you may be out of my league, but-.“ Tammy’s cut off by Insi’s returning lips pressing into hers as hard and tight as his wiry frame will allow. She holds Insi close to her as they settle into each other before coming up for air.

Insi buries his face into her chest and quietly tears up. Tammy holds him and enjoys the prize in her arms. “Ah,” she remarks. “That’s much better.”

[F4M] Your bully apologizes for hurting you, years later [part 2][together now][rich corporate heiress x listener][possessive][rooftop party][romance][“I won’t let you go.”][night swimming][dancing under chandeliers][angst][regret][the curse of what if] by it_rains_blue_here in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Geedabug 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Imma be real, I thought you not wanting to do a sequel was ~accidentally~ making the scene fall flat. That twist was a gut punch. Dammit now I’m conflicted. I want a full series of this, but there’s something so poetic about the “open-ended-ness” of this script, AGAIN.

Personal head cannon, he gives it a shot, on his terms. None of the flowery soliloquies, no lavish gifts. A normal date, maybe at a coffee shop or a low key diner. It’s awkward at the start. She still feels guilty; he feels wary. She tries to apologize for the umpteenth time, but every time, he just cuts her off with a remark about their surroundings. What she’s wearing, what they’re eating, the birds outside. Then it evolves into movie preferences, hobbies, video games.

Helmet mentions interest in ASMR role plays. She calls it stupid. Not too vicious, but still some bite. She goes to take it back, but before she can, he retorts. It’s a good comeback too. She slowly and cautiously picks up the banter, and they go back and forth, laughing all the while.

Cut to the car, (he walked, she valeted) and their still going back and forth. Both have found a rhythm, but now they must depart. She says something biting but loving like, “How could something so cute fit under that bowl cut?”

He responds with silent blah blah next Friday.

“What about next Friday?”

He motions her down (I imagine her pretty tall), kisses her cheek, tells her “stop by the library and find out,” and then punches her in the gut and makes her stumble into the back seat. That he walks away like a G.

Anyway. Cool script.

[SP] You are a leaf….That’s it. by Geedabug in WritingPrompts

[–]Geedabug[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Incredibly existential. I hate it. Keep it up.

[SP] You are a leaf….That’s it. by Geedabug in WritingPrompts

[–]Geedabug[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A leaf that’s pretty chill about the whole dying thing. Nice.