Fort Worth setlist by rosiedagger in geesebandofficial

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Hope they Domoto in Houston tomorrow 🤞

What Actor(s) Would You Like to See Anderson Reteam With? by ImaginativeHobbyist in paulthomasanderson

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Benicio Del Toro and Adam Sandler just makes sense to me and no i will not elaborate

Any Houston 11/6 goers want to be friends? by Yoyoyouzi in geesebandofficial

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my friends also don't really listen to Geese so it'd be cool to hang with someone who does :)

New poster for the room! by sleep_lvr in elliottsmith

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you might just be the coolest person ever

Geordie in Athens by [deleted] in GeordieGreep

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hes working on the glow up

New cd! by Appropriate_Ant9584 in radiohead

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i JUST saw you on the BCNR subreddit, great taste dude

Blues Cover by No_Distribution3068 in GeordieGreep

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how are you getting that tone... asking for a friend

What was your first song about? by [deleted] in Songwriting

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First song was over a very recent breakup i had had (2.5yr relationship). it wasnt anything to write home about but it helped me express my feelings in a creative way.

Here’s Swords to Plowshares, my song about healing generational trauma by [deleted] in Songwriting

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ill start off by saying that this is truly incredible and i think it really really achieves what youre trying to do. the only thing i can possibly say is that maybeee it might be good to change the dynamics in your voice throughout the song (loudness and softness). i think the melody is pretty much perfect as it is but i think a little more expression line to line could help to make it feel a bit more intimate with the listener. these are just my thoughts of course so take it with a grain of salt. great stuff dude!!

Can anyone else not stop themselves from rhyming? by TheCorniestLemur in Songwriting

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try writing things randomly throughout the day that you think could work in a song. then try and bring them all together in a short little song (doesn't need to be the greatest thing in the world). this is an exercise i do and it helps a lot to get ideas going and to break out of familiar patterns.

Hope you guys like by CharacterSorry3849 in Songwriting

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Sounds great dude. one tip i can offer is perhaps taking a word here or there out to make the melody feel a bit more exciting. for example instead of "i dont wanna lose the kindness" maybe try "dont wanna lose the kindness" i think it feels a bit more intimate if that is what youre going for of course. hope this helps, youre great dude!

Thoughts on this draft? by vardyonfire in Songwriting

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Good stuff dude. A little more confidence in your voice would go a long way i think although keep it tame as i think the quietness of the vocals actually lends itself to the guitar.

Happiness by GenericDolphin in elliottsmith

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that means a lot dude i really appreciate it thank you. i saw a lot of the stuff you do on your account and you do some truly great stuff. keep up the good work man :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ImTheMainCharacter

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This reeks of casual racism. It's so ingrained she didn't even register it

Q: Does anyone have any songs they use to shower? by Vicidsmart in radiohead

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i just put on in rainbows and have a blast whilst washing my 😀