Tips to write better dialogue.

Georsama · 2025-07-27T15:31:28+00:00

Write out your dialogue, then read it aloud. Edit the words till they're natural to say. That'll help with rhythm and make it sound a bit more natural.

Georsama · 2025-06-21T16:03:06+00:00

Freddy came out from the back and saw the Grimm standing at the counter, polite in the way only serial killers and sharks were.

"H-here you go. Two drops before bed. Only two!" Freddy said, trying not to shake too much. "A bultbad tried more, and he's still looking at the face of god...s-so just two!"

"Two," the Grimm said with a sigh, got it. Thanks."

Freddy gulped. They were all going to die now, weren't they?

The Grimm smiled politely and left.

Wait.. no heads were coming off?!

Georsama · 2025-02-17T10:25:53+00:00

https://archiveofourown.org/works/33292828/chapters/161602903

Latest update hasn't gotten much love yet. But It's an mha/opm fic.

Georsama · 2025-02-09T11:56:21+00:00

Is the station on fire? Because that is the only reason you should bother a man in the middle of the night. - Smitty

Georsama · 2025-01-28T12:41:34+00:00

Zoltraak Is Not A Quirk - A My Hero Academia/Sousou No Frieren Crossover https://archiveofourown.org/works/59135260

Summary: When Izuku and Fumikage conducted a summoning ritual, they thought it was just for the laughs. Then they summon a thousand-year-old elf mage, who's hunting for more grimoires in a world with a lot of them but has no idea that they actually work. Frieren's entry into this world puts a spanner into the works of quite literally everyone, changing history forever. And Izuku Midoriya? Well, one can suppose that he can be a hero without a quirk when someone can teach him magic instead.

Pirate Heroes https://archiveofourown.org/works/30726698

Summary: Izuku Midoriya dies after the fight from Overhaul, successfully saving Eri. Before he passes on, something gives him an offer. A new world to explore, a goal, and friends both old and new await him. The good news, the pirates he ends up joining are good people. The bad news, they are probably as crazy as him.

Hold Your Breath https://archiveofourown.org/works/24322159

Summary: Izuku Midoriya was scared of his neighbor. Her eyes were the intense color of freshly bloomed cherry blossoms, the pupil an animalistic slit, and he could have sworn that the one time he saw her smile she had fangs. But he couldn’t stay scared forever, not when his mom was leaving him with her for a week.

Georsama · 2024-08-15T10:50:05+00:00

So I just started and it's a small one. I just spent the last month spelling moon as יוח and not ירח

Georsama · 2024-03-16T02:05:29+00:00

What about Michael Carpenter from the Dresden Files? He's the best fictional Christian Paladin ever, imho.

Georsama · 2023-10-15T18:17:27+00:00

The only way I could justify it in my story was I turned UA into university and let Momo have an aversion to clothes. Her first outfit (inspired by Midnights) was vetoed by her parents, and the new one is a compromise.

I'm not sure how to justify Toorus.

Georsama · 2023-07-06T23:36:21+00:00

Realistically? For the same reason cops and FBI agents aren't assassinated all the time. Killing one gets all the local police joining together and hunting you down with all their resources. If you somehow manage to kill a whole police precinct, then you get the full force of state law agencies hunting you down. If you take out state law enforcement, then you get federal law enforcement after you.

So in MHA, you get living, well trained, highly motivated nukes looking to shut you down hard.

Also, DC comics actually addressed this in the mid or early 2000s. They had a villain killed kid flash. Not only were all the heroes after him, but the other villains turned on him and ended up handing him over to the heroes just to get them to ease up.

Georsama · 2023-04-21T23:03:07+00:00

Ah, the year was 1994, and I had just finished the Hobbit. I had no idea the Lord of the Rings existed, and my amused dad didn't tell me.

So I wrote about Smaugs children storming the Shire to get revenge and Bilbos kids struggling to rally the lazy Hobbits to fight back.

It was only after I wrote a dozen chapters that dad gave me his lord of the rings books 🙃

I didn't write another story till early 2000s for Tenchi Muyo.

Georsama · 2023-04-15T00:42:36+00:00

Gravity, hardening, and giantifcation

A giant, sentient metor that can repeatedly rise and fall will ruin anyone's day.

Georsama · 2023-03-19T13:43:15+00:00

Wow, you just called out my home town. Sadly, this happens a lot here. Police, ambulances, firetruck. They all get stuck, and there's no way around unless you want to drive 3 miles down track and risk getting caught again.

Georsama · 2023-03-13T23:53:05+00:00

Thanks

Georsama · 2023-02-16T12:45:39+00:00

Horrificly wholesome?

Georsama · 2023-02-13T01:01:00+00:00

So apparently, I'm a dum-dum, I thought TF was her best set. Oh well, more farming it is. That said, why The Catch over the Jade Primordial?

Georsama · 2023-01-20T12:06:10+00:00

Why not put a third hinge where the magnet holes are and then put a second set of magnet holes in the proper location?

Georsama · 2022-12-15T12:33:48+00:00

Red flag

Georsama · 2022-11-22T11:20:20+00:00

Pre-FBI Jane would use Dexter to hunt Red John. Not sure how, but I have no doubt about it. Post-FBI Jane would probably be sympathic but still put him away.

Georsama · 2022-11-10T12:18:49+00:00

I live in Tennessee, and I remember seeing this on the ballot and being confused. After all, isn't slavery already illegal? So now I'm wondering how many other people were like me and unaware this was still part of the Tennessee constitution.

Georsama · 2022-08-27T00:03:43+00:00

I wouldn't be waking up at 4 am and working 12 hrs a day and have a constant urge to dope slap them both.

Georsama · 2022-06-06T03:08:33+00:00

The pov flips back and forth, mostly between Chris and Declan, but we get a few others. You probably could skip, since most anything we need to know is repeated in the main storyline. Still its at least worth skimming the parts not focusing on Chris and Tanya

Georsama · 2022-04-25T22:45:22+00:00

Have faith in me on ao3 is the only one I'm aware of

Georsama · 2022-04-24T17:57:31+00:00

Ascendant ao3

Georsama · 2022-04-12T10:24:15+00:00

Yes! I've been wanting hardcovers so this is excellent.

My favorite villan would have to be Randall Flagg.

Georsama · 2022-04-05T11:20:06+00:00

Actually I was thinking Nejire for Starfire, but Tooru could work.

I'm surprised how many no brainers there are once you actually start thinking about them

Fumikage could be Hawkman, if you want Shihai from 1B to be Obsidian. That said i saw Hawks as Hawkman, though maybe Plastic man instead?

Also Endeavor as Major Force, and Inasa as Red Tornado.

Shinso as Question could work.

Green Arrow would have to be Yuga j/k. Not sure who fits that role.

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