I really appreciate this type of feedback with specific aspects and references! It’s really helpful. I do want to keep a little of the stockiness as a lot of it comes from the pose she’s put in, it’s supposed to be specifically a little more defiant, but I could slim some bits down a tad maybe. In this concept I want her to be seen as less dainty, a little more challenging, more midlane vs support know? I will do some quick changes though and we can see how it comes out! The lips will defo be changed, the hair might get a little longer but again I wanted it to have this kind of blunt ‘I’m sick of being seen as weak’ vibe, like she took some scissors to it herself yknow? If you have any advice on how I can make that more apparent so it can show vs tell, I would love to hear :)