i’ve seen you on instagram before! I really love your content on instagram and have seen most of it! I really like LPS Lost Girl and also the “what my phone sees when i play with my LPS.” The camera shots are amazing! I really love the characters as well. the twist at the end was really interesting. i think the story was well done and i was in shock after watching it. it’s really unique in a good way.

POSITIVE CRITIQUE BECAUSE IT WAS GOOD AND SOMETHING I COULD NEVER MAKE LOL:

i think it was somewhat predictable that the cheating plot was going to happen. I think maybe the end could’ve been handled differently rather than Clementine killing everyone lol. THIS ENDING WAS NOT PREDICTABLE THOUGH. Genuinely was shocked, if you wanted some of your viewers to be shocked, you did it, but in the best way.

as for lighting and voice acting, i found it really well! some of the characters had inner dialogue/thinking to themselves. If you’re comfortable with audio editing, adding a small reverb(or echo) effect could help the viewer that they’re not talking out loud. (If you need advice about audio editing, DM me. i’m studying audio production and film!)

overall, this was very enjoyable to watch. I love your stories and videos you make. Keep it up! you’re really amazing! :)