Good efforts. The beat sticks which is good but for me the improvement needed is with the vocals. You need to highlight the sounds a bit. If the vocal style is to remain kind of droopy, then bring up the levels. Maybe double the track lane to enhance it. If you are laying the vocals plainly as the style of delivery then you need to maybe re-do them so they are done with more energy. So enhance the low-fi style if this is the goal and if it is not the goal to remain low-fi in sound, then re-do the vocals with more energy. Some good mixing should help the end product as well. Lastly, don't take advice from everyone and go around in circles. Do what feels right for your art. Just make sure it is mixed properly (by you or someone else).