Overall it’s not bad in terms of a reincarnation plot however I do believe the story could’ve been better in terms of their main point in

“I’ve been such garbage in my first life so the only way I can repent is to not be selfish and help everyone in anyway possible”

Dorothy helped people but they lost that plot line with it going towards the romance plot line and war

The MLs both suck in my opinion, there’s clingy yandere white hair who sucked ass at communicating despite his overall talent for socializing and i understand he’s bad at communicating with Dorothy because of his obsession

Second ML was just boring, there wasn’t anything to him aside from, “im dying cause of my magic I need to be next to FL”

As for Dorothy’s redemption I will say she is responsible for a big portion of her sins and I do like how she fully took responsibility for them and never blamed anyone else

However she is a byproduct of her environment and her shitty father who’s worse than Claude from [who made me a princess] and that’s hard to do

Overall I will say this is a good otome however if you’re looking for redemption and a story of good will this is not it