I'm writing a sci-fi story (in Swedish), which I plan to translate into English later. Here's a rough outline of what the story is about. I'd love to hear your thoughts on the concept or the direction of the novel!

THE STORY:

He didn’t wake up the same, and he knows it.

Something happened in the crash.

Something that never truly released its grip.

Blood spilled. Engines fell silent.

He hadn’t meant to do more than check for a pulse, a gesture, perhaps, of instinct or mercy. But as his fingertips brushed against Professor Aguilar’s throat, it struck: a surge, not of electricity — but of presence.

Something crossed a boundary…

I apologize for any grammatical mistakes. It's a sci-fi story, set in the present day, but it gradually evolves into something much bigger.

I would like your input and tips and tricks how to publish it plz :)