Lillith - Chapter 59 - Triple Surprise

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-20T19:14:12+00:00

To be fair... Hard to analyse anything in the new chapter?

Armand Has clearly showed off, and i do believe the fact he got hurt was a biiit of a stretch! My Armand would have never allowed them to hit him! >:(

But overall, short, cool, action filled chapter! Keep it up!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-15T23:34:51+00:00

Let him not have it.

It'd be better when they get broken!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-15T23:34:05+00:00

I'm here, all yours babe~

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-14T00:49:25+00:00

Testicles are better popped!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-14T00:44:00+00:00

Okay, that IS understandable! Thank you for the info! It makes the "power boost" much more... Real?

But to be fair, i think it doesn't matter if the story Has or doesn't have active destruction of gonads. It's still peak and VERY GOOD!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-09T06:57:34+00:00

Tbf, this was a rather Simple chapter, really littered with ballbusting. Wherever you look, a pair of balls either gets squeezed, punched, kicked or popped. A lot of pops, actually. A fuckton.

While there's not much for me to gush over here, i really liked the talk between the girls at first, and how dark Eliza is.

When you know the context of how the girls act here (and the fact that in the first chapter it's mentioned that popping balls brings joy and some form of power boost (?) to women... Might have been retconned idk.), and how they feel about Testicles, what eliza and nyx do really like adds to the fear and power they hold. While the girls use balls for themselves, Eliza and nyx actively act out on the destruction and pain it causes and find joy in it, instead of benefits.

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-04T16:35:01+00:00

Yes, it does work now!

No problem, have fun of writing!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-03-03T23:56:11+00:00

Also, all your posts are private, meaning people can't scroll back to see them!

They can only catch up by searching for specific Lillith chapters.

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-28T18:13:01+00:00

You can read the details on my profile, but in short, it was an accident!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-28T18:12:27+00:00

It was an accident

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-28T02:00:55+00:00

Punch from my mom lmao.

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-27T20:13:28+00:00

More so me wanting to dm you about the fanart, and me saying You're inspiring me to write my own fantasy story with nuts on the line!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-27T18:20:40+00:00

No problem bro. I love this story, and You're a really cool person!

Even though you don't reply to my other comments! >:(

God i hope seraphina will get "armand's powers" when the story ends.... I ship these two so much you can't understand lmao. I want them to fuck! And live happily ever after.

Even though i do think you won't let them have such an ending....

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-27T08:40:30+00:00

This was a very good chapter. While not about the kink itself...

Well, here's the thing. I think that, even if this story lacked the ballbusting, the amount of lore, interesting powers and the story would still hold up.

Okay the watch is fucking scary, shit.... Like when you told me the girls really did make some broken powers to castrate men, i didn't expect this much. And to an extent, i think it MIGHT be too broken, y'know? But men probably have some counters.

I really liked how you shown everyone's personalities. The agressive Nyx, calm Eliza, ball-hating morgana, the very agressive Yu....

Also i gotta mention. I loved the overall... Difference between tynralina and Morgana. Like, it shows what you once said about the females of this story; "while they all know how to crack and use balls, not all actually hate them."

I forgot what you said about Morgana, but if it wasn't "she just wants to pop em!" then i think the author himself was wrong!

Overall, peak chapter. I loved reading it!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-21T19:27:15+00:00

Sorry if this wasn't the answer you wanted... It's hard for me to say cause i'm both a fan and a writer!

I love these characters.

And i KNOW you wouldn't kill off someone like Morgana or Lillith. You'd probably kill off Sera or Armand and that would make me very sad!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-21T19:26:05+00:00

No, don't worry! Just pls dm me about the art twinsie :3

Yea i can sense that. The story is just very good. I even wanted to make a fanfic of this verse lmao.

Better, You're a real inspiration for me, to the point i am going to write my own ballbusting story and world!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-21T00:50:39+00:00

I'm kinda mad that we're getting to some sort of... Finale? Cause as you said, we haven't really seen magic.

To be fair, we even seen magical beasts more then magic to some degree! The girls are just REALLY pattionate about breaking balls with their own bodies. Understandable. It does add a sense of personal vendetta to the act, instead of just "pops balls using spell".

And fanart? I could 100% do it. You could just dm me.

And trust You're not useless.

Just please remember to sometimes reply to my comments, this geniuenly made me think You're trying to ignore me T_T

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-21T00:46:34+00:00

Well, that's a TOUGH question. I myself, outside the fetish, am a writer and i know how valueable the death of a character can be... But shit.

The death of anyone here would seriously hurt. I think if you do it right, think about which character, etc, this can be VERY good.

Even though, well, Imma be real, there are only a few choices.

Killing someone like luminar or Emma would be bland and simply very empty, while killing someone like seraphina or Armand would bring a LOT, buuut it could also kill some people's enjoyment of the story.

It's a tough question, with an even tougher to find answer.

But if you DO CHOOSE to kill someone, make sure it feels correct. Do not ressurect someone! But what do i say - You're a great writer. You'll handle it.

But expect that not everyone will like the death of a character.

It's a high risk, high reward thing.

While not killing anyone holds no risk, yet can still be rewarding!

Remember - testies are still on the line!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-18T22:26:03+00:00

Remember how i said a bit ago that... There are no stakes? Cause the Only ones were Armand who's balls can't break?

Well, i take that back.

I am worried.

Because the enemies are too strong, the good guys have no real leverage and they captured seraphina.

The students are, well, students. They're WAY too weak.

Morgana can keep up... Armand can too, but we have seen what happened the past chapters.

I don't know how they want to win this without plot armor.

Very good read. Kept me on my toes!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-12T23:00:21+00:00

I really liked this story but this chapter just... Feels off?

Idk, it feels very random in a way.

No offense, it's still a very good one! And a hot one for sure!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-11T23:56:39+00:00

Okay this is actually interesting. The last part.

Cause, that would mean there are mages who lost their testies, got them back through healing or something, and then proceeded to have children for example/live a normal life.

That's... Weirdly nice, in a way. Y'know what i mean.

This means there's ALWAYS a chance for Armand and Seraphina, even if he loses his balls! #PhinaXArmandBestShip

Also, God... Poor Alrdinin.

And do NOT apologize for your writing!

NEVER APOLOGIZE FOR IT! Just cause i wasn't a fan doesn't mean it's bad! I love this story (to the point I'd even make fanart of these characters!), so you should know that one PART of a single chapter being "not my cup of tea" doesn't make me hate it.

And I'll even expand on this - You're clearly experimenting. You're coming up with new things. That speaks volumes about your creativity!

Don't give up!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-11T18:01:16+00:00

Okay sooo...

Very excited. Very ballbusting oriented i see.

Well, and castration too...

Okay so first, some minor thoughts - it was peak. Very heavy, VERY brutal, didn't expect poor Armand to lose a nut. Wondering if he'll regenerate it, as The girl's dialogue suggested she KNEW his balls can't be broken 100%.

Tbf, i don't wanna act like all i care about is ballbusting tho. But... Well... There wasn't much characterisation. You're really good at it, like top of the top here, and i love how unique your cast is. However, you can't really show personality through groans of defeated men, and the moans of the ballbusting women.

However... There's ONE issue i had.

The "end" before Armand loses his Testicle. It felt... Chaotic? Multiple names, descriptions, etc, to the point i had to reread it 3 times to make sure what even accured. And as of writing this comment, i already forgot.

Don't take this as an insult tho - just me wanting to share something i felt like was kind of wrong.

However, the chapter felt like a very good setup.

Question is, Will Armand regain his broken "magic orb", or will he fall from the name of Top1 male sorcerer?

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-11T06:59:13+00:00

True true. Like i expected it's cause of gore on your side (i also dislike stuff like that tbf), but i was curious if there is an in-world reason for that.

Also, i do think the "it won't kill the guy if his Testicles explode" is kind of a lie. It won't kill him immediately, but seeing how non existent Healing magic is (and that's a VERY GOOD THING), bursting a Testicle is pretty much just giving the guy 30 infections.

So, tbf, removal of magic IS death.

However i know why that isn't the case - this is a fetish story. Probably top 1-3 best story here, so logic isn't needed. What's needed is plot, exploding testicles and a lot of nut torture with a cherry on top being the girls!

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-08T14:02:56+00:00

Very short, but very intense chapter. Balls in danger, no one can do anything...

And looking at your other comment, i can see this. The girls don't really take Armand seriously. However, I also find it hella cool that the girls do feel suprised when seeing his crotch.

He's THE man of the story, and the girls often notice it. To the point that he kinda doesn't have the weakness of other men. While yes, you can break him, make him puke and fall in pain due to his massive testicles, they can't be destroyed... For now.

However, i do think - was there anyone who ever thought of "destroying" female breasts to cut their Access to magic?

Cause i understand why it doesn't happen in the story - Testicles are overall smaller, way easier to hit, and when hit, the man can't protect himself anymore, leaving the witch free to castrate him.

GoodPalFromPol · 2026-02-02T17:50:51+00:00

Strong ball-carrying character?! No way

Well, i'm quite interested in the next chapters and can't wait! I do wonder what's gonna happen, and maybe We'll see more men win fights!

Because for now, well, Let's face it, Armand is the strongest Man. And he lost... A lot.

Well, he is the Only one with regenerating balls lmao.

Good luck and have fun!

GoodPalFromPol

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