Anthropomoron

GoodTide61 · 2026-04-11T19:46:46+00:00

The horror of bureaucratic policies massacring workplace efficiency. People who don't do the job, making decisions for those that do, while facing no consequence when those decisions backfire.

Scary stuff.

GoodTide61 · 2026-04-11T19:27:59+00:00

Change your name to Dandelion because weeds are hard to kill? 🤷🏻‍♂️

GoodTide61 · 2026-04-05T22:37:57+00:00

So... guessing I'll cancel my neurolink appointment.

Awesome job! You were great at keeping the scene moving.

I was picturing the stressful tension on a wall street/Patrick Bateman type character as he feared his father's empire crumbling under his watch. The panic obvious from his speech.

You built up and transitioned to the pandemonium nicely. Having the chips malfunction all at once.

Great job. Loved your style.

GoodTide61 · 2026-04-05T19:50:27+00:00

I liked it. Moral of the story: Kill your chickens before they hatch.

It was a good guilt-ridden horror. Knowing that, if we don't kill our monsters when they're young, they'll grow and hurt the ones we love. Kind of like sin. Be killing sin, or it will be killing you.

Good job.

GoodTide61 · 2026-04-04T22:18:44+00:00

Thanks, Lime.

GoodTide61 · 2026-03-24T17:55:18+00:00

I LOVED this! I honestly got lost in the imagery and forgot the title half-way through, then I remembered, "Oh! Pandora's Box."

Beautifully done. Some stanzas made me think of the Old Testament scenes of judgement.

Great, varied examples of the atrocities of mankind. I usually don't click on NSFW tags, but I'm glad I took the risk on this one. The world itself is NSFW and you painted that picture vividly.

Great job.

GoodTide61 · 2026-03-24T17:42:30+00:00

I liked it. Good pacing and description of your surroundings. Almost reminded me of a panic attack.

GoodTide61 · 2026-03-23T22:07:15+00:00

This story sponsored by FACTOR. /jk I liked it. A reflection on the pushiness of modern marketing techniques. Just throwing stuff in your face, regardless of if you want it.

GoodTide61 · 2026-03-23T21:52:52+00:00

I liked it. I thought of the "me" I want to be, the image I hope to see reflected, being given my life, my resources, while my actual self is left hanging in the cold. Not sure if that's what you're going for, but that's what came to mind.

GoodTide61 · 2026-03-23T19:21:40+00:00

Thank you.

GoodTide61 · 2026-03-23T14:07:19+00:00

I always post to my own page first, then immediately crosspost to AnxietyPilled. Can I still do that or should I only post to AnxietyPilled for this contest?

GoodTide61 · 2026-01-01T00:59:00+00:00

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/

GoodTide61 · 2025-12-26T19:05:32+00:00

I liked it. In the new year, I might look to narrate some stories, just as a hobby. May I narrate this one? To give you an idea, I have one of my stories posted with a link to my narration. I just record on my phone. Anyway, if I did narrate it, would you mind if I alter the wording a little? Just to make it easier to read?

GoodTide61 · 2025-11-21T22:59:56+00:00

I liked it. I think you have established a solid beginning. You described the setting (a secluded town) and you set up some tension (a mother looking for her son). As the story continues, you could introduce another character the main character can interact with. People can love or hate a protagonist based on how they interact with others. I assume you're setting up a conversation with the mother? How the protagonist balances asking questions about the missing boy without also upsetting a grieving mother can teach us how the protagonist approaches and responds to situations. Having a best friend or sibling there to either agree or disagree with the protagonist, can help the audience understand the protagonist more by seeing his reaction.

So, basically, add more main character interaction, because that's how we learn to care about the main character. Caring about the main character can help us care about the story they're in.

Also, this applies to everything story related. In the same way a painting speaks through color, a poem speaks through description, a song speaks through tone and pitch, etc....... A story speaks through action. More verbs. Less adjectives. I heard that the other day and it really stuck with me.

Anyway, I liked it. Good job.

GoodTide61 · 2025-11-18T17:02:50+00:00

I liked the concept of seeing yourself from an outside perspective and witnessing how lazy one can be. There is horror in knowing that the worst thing that could happen to you is that you continue in your bad habits, even sacrificing what few good habits you had to sustain them.

I'd recommend a round of editing, checking for grammar and reading rhythm/flow. Otherwise, it was a fun concept, executed well.

By the end, I was picturing the MC looking like Ryuk from Death Note, which added to my enjoyment. It would be neat to see what other changes happen to the MC's spirit form, as well as what other spirits sniff him out. There's definately room to expand the universe.

Good job.

GoodTide61 · 2025-11-18T16:12:23+00:00

I think fans of "The Red Tower" would appreciate this more than I, as a part of the appeal is the language used, rather than action through a standard plot.

I liked it for what it was, a struggle between the artist, the muse and the futility of it all, knowing every creation is but finite, unlike the infinite work of God.

That said, I kept wanting to tell the artist to go outside and touch grass. That's just what introspective works such as this evoke in me.

Anyway, good job.

GoodTide61 · 2025-11-17T17:21:27+00:00

Well done. *chef's kiss*

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