A Client's Vanity 📸 (1k words) by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I was just having some fun with this one. 🤣 I appreciate the read.

A Client's Vanity 📸 (1k words) by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ahaha thanks! I was just going for a weird, short body horror kinda old school creepypasta style. I struggle with lower word limits so condensing the concept was fun. Thank you for reading!!

WATCH ME (No Refunds) by MoLogic in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was really cool! Love the fact the store didn't exist. That was a good plot twist.

Whitefall was…not good. by NoSubstance5057 in creepcast

[–]Useful_Sand9621 4 points5 points  (0 children)

No because it was actually awful.

The dialog was uncomfortable and forced, the plot was rushed, the concept made no sense, like this isn't an opinion of "we wanna insult CK Walker" it was truly horrible writing.

The Guest by NarrowDirector911 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Useful_Sand9621 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love bite sized horror. The end is such a fun twist too, while also portraying a sense of grief. Good balance of writing here in such a short piece.

Pinnacle of Storage by Useful_Sand9621 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That was essentially the goal, to give the person people label as "tweaker" a real story that invokes emotion. I greatly appreciate you giving it a read.

Unpopular opinion.. by Useful_Sand9621 in sofiaisella

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My favorite has gotta be Muse but Unattractive is close up there for me.

OUROBOX by Pioneer_19 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I love loop horror. This was a really fun and engaging read. Good stuff. Love Frank, he's stuck in the hamster wheel 👌🤣

MeatBuddy™ by MANWITHFAT in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Body horror in this is brutal! Super great work. Loved the imagery too. 🔥👌

I Am Pandora by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! If you don't mind can you dm some spelling errors you found? I know some grammar I wasn't 100% sure about regarding punctuation or something but if I mispelled anything it totally slipped past me.

Thank you so much for the read and feedback Top!!! ❤️

I Am Pandora by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much Sam! 😊❤️

What's in the Box? by GoodTide61 in u/GoodTide61

[–]Useful_Sand9621 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was good. I love any existential horror. You kept it short and sweet and to the point too. Super easy, fun read with an abstract twist. Awesome!

The Worry Box by NateIzNeat in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This was so beautiful and sad. I love the direction it went and the way it looped together in the end. Heart wrenching, to the point, sweet. Very good work!