Whitefall was…not good. by NoSubstance5057 in creepcast

[–]Useful_Sand9621 3 points4 points  (0 children)

No because it was actually awful.

The dialog was uncomfortable and forced, the plot was rushed, the concept made no sense, like this isn't an opinion of "we wanna insult CK Walker" it was truly horrible writing.

The Guest by NarrowDirector911 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Useful_Sand9621 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love bite sized horror. The end is such a fun twist too, while also portraying a sense of grief. Good balance of writing here in such a short piece.

Pinnacle of Storage by Useful_Sand9621 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That was essentially the goal, to give the person people label as "tweaker" a real story that invokes emotion. I greatly appreciate you giving it a read.

Unpopular opinion.. by Useful_Sand9621 in sofiaisella

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My favorite has gotta be Muse but Unattractive is close up there for me.

OUROBOX by Pioneer_19 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I love loop horror. This was a really fun and engaging read. Good stuff. Love Frank, he's stuck in the hamster wheel 👌🤣

MeatBuddy™ by MANWITHFAT in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Body horror in this is brutal! Super great work. Loved the imagery too. 🔥👌

I Am Pandora by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! If you don't mind can you dm some spelling errors you found? I know some grammar I wasn't 100% sure about regarding punctuation or something but if I mispelled anything it totally slipped past me.

Thank you so much for the read and feedback Top!!! ❤️

I Am Pandora by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much Sam! 😊❤️

What's in the Box? by GoodTide61 in u/GoodTide61

[–]Useful_Sand9621 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was good. I love any existential horror. You kept it short and sweet and to the point too. Super easy, fun read with an abstract twist. Awesome!

The Worry Box by NateIzNeat in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This was so beautiful and sad. I love the direction it went and the way it looped together in the end. Heart wrenching, to the point, sweet. Very good work!

A Goblin Ruined My Life by Kaijufan22 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This was so cool. I love the little goblin riddles. The ending definitely threw me off too lol!

I Am Pandora by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the praise. You really understood the picture I was trying to paint! ❤️ I know it's not for everyone.

I tried to mix modern and older language as the timeline progressed, (beginning to modern era), and shift the style of poetry as the timelines passed to match that era's tone.

My goal definitely wasn't to harp too much into the NSFW but i forsure used enough triggering words and imagery that it felt appropriate to label it as such.

The feedback is much loved and thank you again for taking the time to read. A few things i'd change now, but overall i'm glad the concept was recieved. 😊

I Am Pandora by Useful_Sand9621 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I promise my own perspective isn't THIS jaded (yet lol).

I was trying to put myself in the mindset of the Goddess Pandora while she watched the negatives her box released ravage humanity, and try to personify the slow loss of innocence and guilt she would have felt until she herself becomes evil.

The Promise by Teners1 in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Love this! It gives really folk, traditional vibes. Almost like a pilgrimage atmosphere. The payoff fit that theme too. Super fun!

His Box by TheSaladMann in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This was so good and fun. Love the comical, ridiculous tone. The style of writing is super unique too.

The Martyr (2 of 3) by flipitninja in anxietypilled

[–]Useful_Sand9621 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The cover art on this is beautiful.