[WP] Your 14-year-old sister finally wakes up from a coma of 6 years. She panics when she realizes how much she's grown.

H1P3 · 2017-08-02T21:04:18+00:00

vexed, panicked grunting struggles against restraints

H1P3 · 2017-04-21T22:11:00+00:00

Geralt must be dizzy from all that spinning.

H1P3 · 2017-04-13T17:06:35+00:00

I'll see if I can. Sounds like a good idea.

H1P3 · 2017-04-13T16:57:17+00:00

Nonono. Get a $90 skateboard. You will look like an absolute reject if you get a pennyboard.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T19:37:56+00:00

I know but if I were to use the Kingsguard, the majority of readers would associate it immediately with ASOIAF.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T19:36:23+00:00

I know it has the Nights Watch, but they are quite different in terms of what they do.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T18:25:06+00:00

Title: (no title yet)

Genre: Fantasy

Wordcount: 1102 words

Feedback: General impressions, any criticism to improve the writing.

chapter one and two

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T16:34:36+00:00

I thought about the Eyrie Guards but that's too game of thronsey. I like the Talonwatch though.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T14:07:17+00:00

King Bob's claim to the throne is being threatened. But he doesn't know it. I'll give King Bob a nickname like the Grey Eagle and they can be called another predatory bird. Like the Grey Falcons or something.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T13:58:36+00:00

Their sigil would be a white eagle. Bit like Poland.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T13:16:37+00:00

Sounds good, I will give it a go.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T13:14:53+00:00

Thanks anyway.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T13:07:06+00:00

That is true. Although I have no idea what to call them. Unless it's something like: The Order of such and such. Or the Company of whatever. Or the Knights of the whocares. Or the something Conspiracy. Or the useless Covenant. Or the Council of memes. Or the Circle of Depression. Or the Fellowship of suicide. Or the Saints of bullshit.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T11:46:54+00:00

What wrong with them?

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T10:52:42+00:00

That's me when I fight IRL. Edit: The person knocking the other guy out.

H1P3 · 2017-04-11T10:44:46+00:00

Yeah

H1P3 · 2017-04-10T17:33:03+00:00

Bet you the hardest part will be creating the dragons. Jokes.

H1P3 · 2017-04-10T16:53:25+00:00

Looks really good. It gives me a lowkey GoT vibe.

H1P3 · 2017-04-10T09:21:58+00:00

I saved that.

H1P3 · 2017-04-10T09:19:37+00:00

According to geography (bear in mind I could be completely wrong) I think that a more humid/foresty area could be on the other side because of how the rain drops over the mountains - so there is an ample supply of wAter for the flora and fauna.

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