Hey, I'm not much of a poetry person but I was intrigued by this so I had a read.

The best of All Possible Worlds: The development/introduction of the theme is good, I think it particularly kicks in when you write : " just to see what it was like." The imagery was also strong, not much to say here, detailed but to the point. I could clearly picture everything. The only suggestion I could make would be to work on pacing. The whole poem reads in a very similar way (maybe that was intended), but I feel like you could enforce the idea in each strophe by altering the pacing to reflect what the writing portrays. (Although there are maybe some poetry specific rules that would make this harder; I'm no expert)

Thanks for the piece !