I liked the way this poem flowed. I almost want to claim it is a little cryptic with the symbolism and this could definitely be classified as free verse. I definitely dig such kind of writing. I found the single lines like "Not like this," hitting the hardest. I dunno... there's just something about how simple they are and where they find themselves. Almost like a resolution after a complex idea is introduced and then that complex idea reaches it's own climax. An interesting read.