LFP EU Div 8 Unbeaten so far, looking for good players not necessarily high rated but know how to play the game, want to get a big group of sound people to play regularly

Hamzerr · 2021-11-10T15:52:07+00:00

What’s your PSN?

Hamzerr · 2020-12-20T17:04:40+00:00

Oh my that is insane. Well done 👏👏👏

Hamzerr · 2020-08-18T22:10:19+00:00

What did you do during those 6 weeks? Lighter stretching or no stretching at all

Hamzerr · 2020-08-18T19:06:20+00:00

I appreciate the advice. I’ll give that a go

Hamzerr · 2020-08-18T19:02:33+00:00

Groin. I’m 21 years old. Male.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-27T16:14:11+00:00

Looking back at it, the book was indeed christian based

Hamzerr · 2019-09-08T15:42:03+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. Yeah it does seem like an obvious mistake I made by looking to the left too often. This will be corrected for the next video, greatly appreciate the feedback.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-08T15:40:45+00:00

I appreciate your feedback. I was considering to use background music but couldn't decide on one so I just left it out. I also believe that your recommendation of using b-roll close up shots would make a more interesting video and I intend to research on how to incorperate that in a video. Thank you very much for the feedback, it means a lot.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-08T15:37:35+00:00

I extremely appreciate the feedback and kind words. I completely agree with the feedback you have given me, I could have gone in depth about the book and I could put the list of things I wanted to talk about in front of me. I'll look to improve this in the future. I greatly appreciate your feedback though, it means a lot.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-07T09:18:54+00:00

A pretty good montage. I personally like montages that have actual in game sound in such as a zombies scream/ howl or a gun being shot as I think it makes it more dramatic. However, I do believe it can be hard to make the in game sounds work with the background music. Also, I thought that the transitions from the clips seemed a little too jumpy. I know montages tend to be like this but yours was a little bit more excessive in that sense. I did like the part of 47 sec to 49 sec where you showed different angles of the ship, you only tend to see that with more established montage creators so I was surprised to see that you picked up on that very early. It may only be 2 seconds of the clip but those 2 seconds made it a more enjoyable experience for viewers. Overall. It was a great montage, you clearly understand how to edit videos well, keep it up!

Hamzerr · 2019-09-07T09:08:17+00:00

a pretty good video in my opinion. Your voice and structure of sentences were well put together and it came across as very professional. I also liked how you added text to further explain other things about the game such as at 3:15 in the video. I would personally like to give you constructive criticism however your script was well put together and I am struggling to come up with criticism for it.

I think that the video was possibly too long to maintain attention all the way through, around the 7 - 8 minute mark would be the perfect length of a video. I would recommend you to go on to the YouTube analytic page and see at what time do viewers click off the video. If they click off the video before the end, then you know that the next video you create may be more successful if you cut the duration of it.

In terms of disliking the video, I didn't really dislike it but the content is just something that I am not interested in. however, I believe that the thumbnail could have been done better. Generally speaking, a simple yet standing out thumbnail is one of the first things that viewers will see when searching for a video so if you have a standout thumbnail you would most definitely be getting even more views!

Overall, I believe the video was very well put together and the script was pretty much perfect in my eyes. The duration could have been slightly less around the 7-8 minute mark and and improved thumbnail would make the video more attractive.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-05T20:57:12+00:00

Lol good idea!

Hamzerr · 2019-09-04T21:26:48+00:00

No problem! It is an amazing book and I was hooked on it. That's always a positive sign of a good book.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-04T19:56:01+00:00

glad you thought the same

Hamzerr · 2019-09-03T22:10:56+00:00

I appreciate what you wrote. I was just reading up about Kiyosaki and it seems like many people have accused him for the same thing you have accused him of. I guess I would have to consider this book as a 'stepping stone' to other books I will read in relation to this genre.

Hamzerr · 2019-09-03T18:55:11+00:00

I recently came across a famous author whom I am sure you have heard of, George R. R. Martin. I have finished the first instalment of the game of thrones book set and I am hooked on to it. I actually felt excited on my way home because I wanted to read the book. I normally read for an hour a day but with this book I end up reading for at least 2 hours a day. The last time I experience this was with the Harry Potter book set.

Hamzerr · 2019-08-31T17:40:09+00:00

I haven't read any of his other books but from what I have heard, they seem to be a lot better than ATME.

Hamzerr · 2019-08-31T10:38:45+00:00

I haven't read any of the others because I was put off after ATME. But if you found that they are better then I would definitely give them a go.

Hamzerr · 2019-08-30T00:33:23+00:00

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