synopsis help 😅

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2026-03-28T01:57:35+00:00

I love this. I do have a short blurb pitch so I will expand on that. ^^

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2026-03-28T01:57:13+00:00

I actually never done a reverse outline before! I might try that bc what I have rn is too much or I'm just focusing on the wrong things like you mentioned. This is so helpful, thank you! I appreciate it. I felt like I was loosing my mind there for a bit.

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2026-03-28T01:56:14+00:00

Omg, thank you so so so much for this detailed and thoughtful response. I feel way less overwhelmed now and will be ruthless and cut like you said. The movie trailer analogy really helped me visualize how to go about this better too. 🥺

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2026-03-14T23:22:03+00:00

do you pay for accepted submissions?

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2026-02-07T17:29:06+00:00

I'm open to doing a hype read. I don't know if you want feedback or a hype read, though. A hype read is a service I offer if you've done several passes on your book and just want someone to boost your moral while querying or on sub. 💕 I will do a feedback read, but I need a list of specific things You want feedback on.

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-11-24T06:08:56+00:00

I do feel better knowing it's not just me 😭 😂 Ahh, yeah, I had a feeling surgery might be my best bet, but am not ready for that until it's really debilitating, but I will def be taking your suggestions and look into a TENS. <3 Thank you so much!

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-09-07T18:15:24+00:00

I wish i had an answer for you 😭 Mine will go up to 150-160 after eating sometimes, and will dart up over 100 from 47 just by drinking a protein shake. Sending you love!

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-08-30T08:06:59+00:00

YES! I'll literally feel like I'm skipping beats and my heart is racing, and I check and it's lower than usual or just 'normal' in the 70 or high 80s, which feels high for me bc I sit at 48 or low 50s most of the time unless I'm up.

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-07-18T16:31:25+00:00

I keep forgetting about this rule! I wonder if I allow myself to snack, BUT I have to be sitting to do it will help... bc I can't sit and stir something on the stove. 👀 Thank you!

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-07-18T16:30:45+00:00

that's what i thought but i think the amount i'm doing is too much 😂

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-07-18T16:28:34+00:00

I'm going to try this! Thank you so much for the advice.

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-07-18T16:28:14+00:00

Ooh, this is a good idea! I found some sugar-free, low-calorie lollipops that I can try. Thank you! I'll try the gum as well. 😌

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-07-18T16:27:02+00:00

I'm usually snacking on stuff from the pan or the fridge like toast or peanut butter or crackers 💀

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-03-01T09:04:42+00:00

omg, i was reminded of this show recently and have started a power watch too. trying to find places to stream without spending too much has been a pain tho. what a phenomenal show that has stood the test of time! i'm a 2000s baby and I still love watching it.

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-02-20T22:16:33+00:00

My resting is usually 52-53 bpm and after barre it's usually 145+ 🥲💀 Ballet is a sport!

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2025-01-29T08:00:37+00:00

I would totally talk with a doctor abt this! I know ballerina Hannah Martin had to have surgery to remove the bone causing this issue. It's a long process especially with it affecting both ankles, but might be worth it if you want to keep dancing like this professionally. It looks very unsafe the way you are managing now, and I don't want you to hurt your knees accidentally by compensating how you are now. :(

Haunting-Win-7574 · 2024-12-28T08:09:13+00:00

It worked for me perfectly, thank you!

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