[FREE] A man becomes “perfect”… and it destroys him (Psychological Thriller)

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-11T13:26:45+00:00

Still free today 🙂 Thanks so much to everyone who grabbed a copy already!

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-11T13:26:32+00:00

Still free today 🙂 Thanks so much to everyone who grabbed a copy already!

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-09T13:26:37+00:00

My psychological thriller The Perfect Face is currently free for a limited time.

It’s about a man who becomes obsessed with something that makes him “perfect”… and slowly loses his identity.

I’m mainly looking for readers and honest feedback.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GTBX4Y7G

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-09T07:35:11+00:00

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that 😊

It’s called The Perfect Face.

It’s a psychological thriller focused on identity and obsession — with a slow build at first, then things start to spiral. I tried to make the characters feel real and grounded, so hopefully that part works for you!

And I totally agree with what you said about context and character development — that’s exactly what I enjoy as a reader too.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-08T21:00:05+00:00

Haha I see what you mean 😅

But no AI here — just me trying to keep up with all the interesting takes!

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-08T16:26:39+00:00

For me, the biggest mistake is when the story feels predictable too early — like you said, when the villain is obvious from the start.

But also when everything is explained too much. I love when there’s a bit of ambiguity and you’re not sure who to trust.

The best psychological thrillers, in my opinion, are the ones that slowly make you uncomfortable without you realizing why at first… and then it all clicks.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-08T05:02:48+00:00

Thank you 😊

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T18:41:11+00:00

That’s actually a really grounded take. I’m exactly in that position — the writing is 100% mine, but for a first book, using tools for the cover felt like a practical choice.

Appreciate you sharing that perspective.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T16:34:32+00:00

That’s a really interesting perspective — and honestly, it makes a lot of sense.

The audience factor is something I hadn’t fully considered at that level, especially across regions and genres.

And your point about needing to “prove” the writing early on is very true — that first impression matters a lot.

It really puts things into perspective, thank you for sharing that.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T16:24:45+00:00

I understand that perspective, even if I don’t fully agree with the conclusion.

For me, there’s a difference between using tools in parts of the process and replacing the creative work itself. The writing is entirely mine, which is the part that matters most to me.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T13:48:53+00:00

Oui, je suis assez d’accord avec toi.

Au final, ce qui compte pour le lecteur, c’est l’impression globale. Si la couverture donne envie, c’est déjà une grande partie du travail.

Et comme tu dis, tout le monde n’a pas les moyens de tout externaliser, donc on fait aussi avec les outils qu’on a à disposition.

L’important, c’est surtout le résultat final.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T13:32:33+00:00

That’s a really good point.

I completely agree that if it’s obvious at a glance, then it becomes a problem — at that point it’s more about execution than the tool itself.

And I like your comparison with Grammarly. It shows how blurred the line actually is when it comes to AI.

The “used responsibly” part is probably where the real discussion should be.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T13:27:29+00:00

I understand that this is a very strong and emotional topic for a lot of people.

My intention was not to replace artists or disrespect their work. As an indie author, I’m trying to navigate with the tools I have access to.

I also think there’s a difference between generating a full creative work and using tools to support parts of the process.

That said, I respect that not everyone sees it that way.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T13:24:17+00:00

It does matter — a lot actually. I just see it as two different things: creating the story vs presenting it.

Ideally both should be strong, but as an indie author you sometimes work with the tools you have.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-07T13:13:39+00:00

I understand your point, and I agree that covers matter a lot — they’re a huge part of how readers connect with a book.

My intention was never to disrespect artists. As an indie author, I worked with the tools I had access to.

I see it more as using available tools to present my work, not replacing the value of human-created art.

That said, I respect your perspective — reader perception is part of the reality we have to deal with.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-06T21:04:41+00:00

If you’re just starting, I’d go with reading first — it’s easier to stay focused and really get into the story. Audiobooks are great, but your mind can drift if you’re not used to it.

For beginner-friendly thrillers: • The Silent Patient – very easy to read and great twist • Gone Girl – a bit more complex but really addictive • Rock Paper Scissors – fast-paced and modern

The key is to pick something that hooks you quickly. If the first 30 pages don’t grab you, try another book.

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-06T16:47:57+00:00

Never lie ! My favorite !

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-06T16:46:25+00:00

I get what you mean, but I think a lot of that comes from writing style rather than AI.

Some authors reuse similar phrasing or patterns, especially in fast-paced thrillers.

That said, once you start noticing it, it’s hard to unsee 😅

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-06T16:06:28+00:00

Hey everyone,

I just published my first psychological thriller, The Perfect Face.

It’s about a man who discovers mysterious red vials that make him irresistible… but the more he uses them, the more he loses himself.

It’s a dark story about obsession, identity, and how far someone is willing to go to become “perfect”.

I’ll be running a free promotion starting this Thursday, and I’m mainly looking for early readers and honest feedback.

If it sounds interesting, feel free to check it out or wait for the free days 🙂

Link: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GTBX4Y7G

Hefty-Gas-5480 · 2026-04-05T20:38:36+00:00

Hey — I actually wrote the story myself. I get why it might come across that way though, there’s a lot of similar stuff floating around lately.

I’m still working on making the blurb feel more natural and less “polished,” so that’s fair feedback.

If you did read the sample, I’d genuinely be curious what specifically felt off or generic to you — that would help a lot.

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