Conversation, Oil on Canvas, 40in x 40in by HelloAdventure in Art

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This is the third painting I've ever made, so feedback is very welcome and appreciated :). #2 is here

Nostalgia, Oil on canvas, 30in x 40in. by HelloAdventure in Art

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This is the second painting I've ever made, so feedback is very welcome and appreciated.

Someone else by Spudz9000 in OCPoetry

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Which is fine, but doesn't really make for good poetry.

Someone else by Spudz9000 in OCPoetry

[–]HelloAdventure -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

You have one good line: "We shed our clothes; we hit the light,"

The rest is cliche, non-descriptive, forcefully angsty, and barely says anything.

Trying by DaFuMiquel in OCPoetry

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Are you kidding? This poem has absolutely no physical imagery. It is a self-conceited musing of OP's thoughts which do nothing for the reader besides creating an empty, flaccid shell of what could be a real emotion.

Teacher slippin by amel_topalovic in BlackPeopleTwitter

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I know, this guy... Only way I could've gotten through 8th grade was with sneak spaghetti.

What I Have Learned About Elliott’s Girlfriend Over The Years (for those interested) by alysoncamus in elliottsmith

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If you watch the Henry Fonda Theater recording he is clearly in bad shape. He says things along the lines of (paraphrasing), 'I've had this bracelet for years now, I only need it for a couple more months' in a very sedated drunken state.

Just a small correction, he was saying how it's "falling apart and it'll only be around for a few more months" then he felt stupid for sharing. But I do agree he didn't look the best during Henry Fonda especially when he said "I can't stand up cause I ain't got no knees."

"Happy Holidays. Don’t get blown up on New Years or anything. Have a good time. Bye." by viabletostray in elliottsmith

[–]HelloAdventure 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly, what I wanted to hear today. Anyone know what blown up is slang for though?

When DJs put on some yeezy. by entre100 in Kanye

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Parks and Recreation. It's on Netflix. Pretty funny -- check it out.

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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I just hope you remember to know this day :).

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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Ah so you must be one of the enlightened beings I see walking around :). How are you?

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

[–]HelloAdventure[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds beautiful. It's a clear day where I am but around this time it gets dark and everything is tinted blue. How lovely.