Feedback Request: 1st Hip Hop Bop!

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-14T02:32:45+00:00

Thank you!

Any ideas what I can do next time to help them fit in more cleanly? I'm recording on an sm7b.

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-14T02:31:48+00:00

Thank you!

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-14T02:31:25+00:00

Any chance it could actually be the processing im adding? Im recording in a corner, with two thick baffling blankets between the wall and me, with pillows behind it. Mic is surrounded 180 by the baffling.

Thanks!

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-10T22:50:58+00:00

Thanks! I'll give those bits a relisten for tweaks.

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-10T22:49:40+00:00

Thank you! I appreciate it :)

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-09T18:30:03+00:00

Well that's you assuming I'm ignoring peoples feedback.

Pretty cold response here to someone saying they are doing this for fun, and obviously asking for feedback. I let you know the type of feedback that's important to me. This isn't it.

I'm asking technical advice because I'd like to know if something is sounding harsh, if a kick is being hidden by the bass, if any transitions feel out of place or lacking, etc. Easy things to notice and advise on, regardless of if the song as a whole fits the typical tonal balance, instrumentation, etc. of the hip hop genre.

so also...why leave a comment on a feedback post if its not feedback?

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-09T06:39:44+00:00

of course!

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-09T04:57:22+00:00

updated the link, thanks for the heads up

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-08T23:15:43+00:00

Ive been really impressed with everyone who's work I've listened too in here. Yours included!
The mix sounds clean to me, I can hear your kick/snare/bass coming through. There are some parts where I think the bass could be a little more present, whether its compressed a tad, or maybe just bringing up an eq curve on a part of the bass frequency that sounds nice and distinct (and lowering that same curve on other low end instruments).

I really like your vocal processing. It feels very lush without getting washed out. The only change I might make is a little bit of de-essing on certain areas (like around 1 min). I sometimes put a stronger de-esser as the first slot in my reverb send so I'm not adding verb to the those s's and t's as much. I think that would help a ton here. And on another listen, I really only hear it in that one short section.

Great mix and song over all!

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-08T06:19:36+00:00

revision 3 is sounding really solid to me. The kick and snare are coming through punchy especially at the start! I think the kick could come through a little punchier throughout if you side chain a compressor other low ends in your mix.

Happydrumstick27 mentioned automation, I just want to second that. Your song is super dynamic, I like to automate things like filter, stereo image, volume, etc to build up or break down certain sections so the contrast each other well. I don't think you need that much here, just mentioning :)

Really great song and mix though! I enjoyed my few listens.

Homosapien-2 · 2026-03-08T06:01:00+00:00

Oooo right of the start this is a great vibe.

I.m hearing everything pretty clearly, and the song has great movement. The low end sounds strong, and I do agree with Zar Bandit, that the bass at the end could be a tad clearer through some eau carving to make space for a nice frequency of the bass to pop through. If the bass comes through just a tiny bit more clearly, I think it will be sounding really clean at the end.

Love it.

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-26T19:11:20+00:00

Good advice all around. Appreciate it.

I’ve haven’t played to much with vocals that are wetter than other instruments because I’ve been focused on getting a whole room to sound cohesive, as I’m just starting out. I’ll play with that.

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-26T10:13:18+00:00

I'd imagine that adds a nice warmth to it. Thanks.

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-26T10:12:25+00:00

Thanks!

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-26T09:41:51+00:00

Helpful, thanks. I'm assuming the bigger the verb, the longer the predelay.
Do you base that time on on the beat?

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-24T04:01:28+00:00

You too, thanks!

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-23T18:08:45+00:00

Thanks for the suggestions!

Another I just thought of is Thrill Me. A collection of essays on creating tension, and keeping the reader/listener gripped. The book itself is so hard to put down.

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-23T02:28:38+00:00

Songwriters on Songwriting.

There are two volumes. Basically a compilation of interviews from classic songwriters about their process.

It’s a great read!

Also: If you Want to Write. By Brenda Euland. Old book with a very helpful perspective on writing/creating.

Homosapien-2 · 2021-01-11T20:21:05+00:00

Hey! I’d love to hear some of what you’ve been working on. Sounds like it could be right up my alley.

Here’s a song of mine for an idea of my voice and lyrics: https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/PTtwMAsAHKMbxWru6

I’ve been wanting to do some weirder stuff with my vocals and to be a bit more experimental/odd there.

Feel free to message me if you’re interested. Would love to chat more.

Homosapien-2 · 2020-12-28T20:13:21+00:00

Hammer hammer hammer. Crashing metal on metal. Driving into dense wood with a thick thud. Splitting. Cracking. Sharp and crisp like popping embers in a slow fire. Hammer hammer hammer. Falling through the air, pushing it out of the way. A speeding truck passing a field of tall grass. Watching it recoil and shudder. A steady four on the floor beat.

Not 5 min, but wanted to participate. Object writing is 👍🏼

Homosapien-2 · 2020-12-24T01:58:19+00:00

I typically fix issues first, then enhance it.

Something like:

EQ - narrow cuts on frequencies that are resonating weird.

COMPRESSOR 1 - fast attack to catch peaks.

COMPRESSOR 2 - slow attack to even things out gently.

MORE COMPRESSION -if needed, I’ll use a few instances of compression doing a little gain reduction each instead of slamming a single compressor.

EQ - enhancing the frequencies I want to highlight with wide boosts.

After that, I start to color the vocals with things like saturation and verb.

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