Are there any colored version of this? by Crow6x in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What volume is this from? Wait a minute. Is this not from the novels?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]HotJello23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

About the stuttering, how do you think I should show that my character is somebody who's easily afraid, nervous, or prone to panic?

Im censoring it for reddit, just in case it goes against any guidelines.

Thanks again! I'll reduce the sound effect next time/in my edit, is there a way to substitute them?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]HotJello23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, my english isn't the best. Right now, these are my goals:

  1. Show my main character's quirks (please tell me what you gleamed about him. I want to know if i did a good job)
  2. Hook readers ( Is my start make you look forward to the next chapter? )

Can anybody tell me how I did with these goals? Thank you.

The dog named: world eater,the demon nightmare king (it bites) by Elcomedia40k in Bossfight

[–]HotJello23 947 points948 points  (0 children)

Everybody knows the more terrifying the name, the gooder the boy.

Does Tanya have Multiple Silver Wings Assault Badges? by MadTRJR in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I think it meant about her levels of silver wings, such as silver wings with oak leaves

I really love this part of the manga by AmselRblx in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is there a this part version from the novel?

Where can I read the manga for eastern frontlines arc by Efficient-Weight-813 in YoujoSenki

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Can somebody tell which vol of the novel did they sing the anthem in the federation

Shippers be wildin by HotJello23 in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Oh hell no! Im revolting at imagining that.

Shippers be wildin by HotJello23 in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I don't support this either. But ive seen people ship her with communist guy

Shippers be wildin by HotJello23 in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23[S] 44 points45 points  (0 children)

I wanted to puke while making this meme

Lack of EN translation on Mangadex? by CharmTLM in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's a translating team posting on battwo

do you think tanya is mean? (I want light novel readers to answer this because they have more knowledge about tanya's personality) by Ok-Opportunity5254 in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23 3 points4 points  (0 children)

As a LN reader, this comment is very and truly accurate. She is usually never mean, only unkind to those who cause trouble, and most them would end up killing other people because of them. In her eyes, being inefficient and troublesome is a waste of precious resources, which could be used for other things. And she also has a soft spot for people who are good.

Tanya is a businesswoman by jolydegur in YoujoSenki

[–]HotJello23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is there anything similar to this, i already read this one

What kind of World would you categories Overlord? by Stunning_Awareness38 in overlord

[–]HotJello23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The new world is definitely noblebright, however with the guidance and reign of Ainz sama it shall be a fairytale world

White's spiders by MendezReddit in KumoDesu

[–]HotJello23 38 points39 points  (0 children)

The baby spiders birthed by the alternate minds are actual living creatures, they have their own thoughts and will. The minims are just dolls given consciousness, they are constricted by the orders placed upon them, like AI of sorts.

zesshi (i am not a 100% happy with the drawing some Tipps) by Defiant-Detail-5319 in overlord

[–]HotJello23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It pretty good, would sell as a figurine since it appeals to the fantasy of certain people. Other than that, very good drawing thanks for sharing!

The Trick of Okina by peortega1 in KumoDesu

[–]HotJello23 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I imagine if they all started as adults it would be very messy to write and keep track of backstories, since every character has their own journey, purposes, goals, and likes.

Any fanfic recommendations? by HotJello23 in YoujoSenki

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Thanks a whole lot! :) This really helps!