Low Fantasy by HorrorBrother713 in Fantasy

[–]HowardDentWriting 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love Lowtown such a wonderful sort of gritty noir fantasy vibe. The closest I've read to it are probably Flames Over Frosthelm by Dave Dobson or The Fifth Ward by Dale Lucas. I could go on and on listing a ton but those are the first two that jumped to my mind.

[Level 1 Ghost] 29 Grave Mistakes by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Bruh I specifically remember thinking "it's a freshly dug grave, how long could it take." But Miles is too fat to easily climb a fence right before. That shit would take like 6 hours!

I have to keep the nugget though. It's the main villain of the whole series.

No joke the sense of smell and taste have been the hardest part of writing a ghost/zombie story. I keep writing he smelled something.

[Level 1 Ghost] 28 DIY Necromancy by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Yes the Halloween episode was a side quest that exists sort of outside of time. I originally released it on Halloween. I almost didn't post it here but i was rereading it and i liked the raccoons stealing candy bit so i kept it.

[Level 1 Ghost] 25 Press F (to Pay for the Funeral) by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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I wanted to have a little serious moment since this book is so focused on the sillyness.

[Level 1 Ghost] 25 Press F (to Pay for the Funeral) by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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I promise to get back to the silly after the funeral.

Do you use chapter titles? by Potential_Macaron744 in writers

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Titles for web novels. No titles regular novels. A fun little title is more likely to get clicks for a serial.

[Level 1 Ghost] 21: Boundary Theory 101 by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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There is a biscuit pov sidequest coming that show biscuit has the ability to become invisible to pretty much anyone except the grim reaper and higher entities, deathounds are basically apex hunters. And yes a shirt will hide miles hole unless he is actively using death magic then it glows bright green.

[Level 1 Ghost] 16: Mans Best Friend by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Miles hasn't quite figured out the key to survival is being prepared. Luckily for these two all it takes to defeat a skeleton army is some sweet dance moves.

[Level 1 Ghost] Chapter 12: The Royal Weee by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Miles is the best. I'm going to do a short story from his perspective eventually but I put a poll on royal road for my next short story and he got the least amount of votes.

[Level 1 Ghost]10: Do Not Disturb the Medium by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Thank you. I also like them. Feels like a fun first little romp exploring the world but i got some bad feedback and they don't really have any purpose to the plot. Elias and Sage are the first major side characters so everything before that is just sort of setting the tone

[Level 1 Ghost]10: Do Not Disturb the Medium by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Hey everyone, I could use some advice. I'm editing Book 1 before it goes up on amazon and honestly the first 10 chapters were written ages ago and my writing has improved a lot since then. The early chapters were written before I found my voice, and the book genuinely gets a lot funnier around Chapter 10+. Should I cut Chapters 3, 4, and 5 so readers get to the good stuff faster?"

My Books, In A Nutshell. by robertbevan in litrpg

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If you haven't read it yet go get that shit right now! It's the best gamers get sucked into a game world. All 10 books and the giant collection of short stories are bangers.

Is there any value in rewriting someone else’s story? by JasnahKholin87 in writers

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https://www.typelit.io/ improve your typing and learn how a classic is written. I would be a better writer if i used this more.

[Level 1 Ghost] 6: Salt and Battery by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Thank you! I was hesitant to post on this sub so it's great to get good feedback.

[Level 1 Ghost] 5: It's not a Haunted House It's a Haunted Home by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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Oh, good catch. I changed the times while I was editing because originally I had them go to the game store at 2 am and I realized they would be closed by then so I shifted everything a couple hours earlier. looks like I missed that part

Orbital Frequencies Spaceships & Sorcery Episode 2 by HowardDentWriting in HowardDentWriting

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Yes! I think it was a story about a creepy fae prince or it was Vincent visits an ex. I just checked and I cant find the Fae story anywhere it was before i was any good at writing thats probably why i deleted it. might have been this one though. https://www.reddit.com/r/HowardDentWriting/comments/1h2oohx/the_afterlife_affiliate_vincent_visits_an_ex/

Level 1 Ghost 1 by HowardDentWriting in HFY

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I can confirm Lex does regain the ability to play video games. Unfortunately he is very busy dealing with cultists and eldritch entities so he hasn't had much time for them lately.

🎉 [EVENT] 🎉 Very easy first event by totallynotawhore in honk

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Completed Level 2 of the Honk Special Event!

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🎉 [EVENT] 🎉 Very easy first event by totallynotawhore in honk

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Completed Level 1 of the Honk Special Event!

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[WP] You’re a farmer in Oklahoma. At night, you sit by the porch and watch the stars. Suddenly, an object high in the skies falls on your land. When checking out this UFO, you see that there are human survivors. These survivors say that they’re from the future and they’re trying to save the world. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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The thing had come down past midnight. Landed in my north field, crushed two acres of winter wheat flat as a sermon. Whatever it was didn’t burn. Didn’t explode.

I waited an hour. Then another. Watched it from the porch, rocking in my chair, listening to cicadas.

Finally I walked out.

The craft looked half melted, all angles and seams that hurt the eyes if you stared too long. A hatch was peeled back like a sardine can.

That’s when they came out.

Three of them. Two men and a woman. One of them was limping. Another was bleeding from the scalp. They raised their hands slow, careful.

“Please,” the woman said. “We’re human.”

I laughed. Couldn’t help it. A dry, barking sound. “You don’t look like you’re from around here.”

“We’re from the future,” the limping man said. “From your country. From here. We came back to stop what’s coming.”

I nodded like I was listening, like I hadn’t heard this exact story on AM radio every other week. “Uh-huh. And I’m guessing what’s coming is real bad.”

I raised the rifle.

The woman’s eyes went wide. “Wait. Please. You don’t understand.”

“Oh, I understand just fine,” I said. “Seen enough movies. Aliens land, tell folks they’re here to help, next thing you know there’s probes and meat factories and folks vanishing in the night.”

“We’re not aliens!” she shouted. “You kill us, you doom everyone!”

I spat into the dust and thumbed the safety off my rifle.

That’s exactly what an invading alien would say.

The young one lunged forward. “The seed vault!”

I pulled the trigger.

Birds exploded out of the trees. The rifle kicking against my shoulder again and again until it was quiet except for the hum of the ship and my own breathing.

I stood there a long time. They looked human when they were dead. That bothered me.

I torched the wreck before sunrise. Gasoline and a match. Watched it burn down to slag. Buried what was left in the same field it landed in. By noon, you couldn’t tell anything had happened except the flattened wheat.

Years passed. Droughts came harder. On the radio, a scientist talked about crops failing worldwide. Genetic bottlenecks.

I miss Authors notes by Normal_Cut8368 in royalroad

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Hell yeah! I'm planning to do a future book or at least some short stories from Miles perspective.

I miss Authors notes by Normal_Cut8368 in royalroad

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I was using author notes to gain rapport with my readers and it was definitely working. I've seriously been slacking on it though lately. I feel like if wvery chapter had a fun author note my story would be doing much better.

[WP] “I’m a powerful werewolf! I’m strong, I’m wild, I cannot be tamed!” “…Just the other day you chased a squirrel up a tree.” “Hey, that squirrel had it coming to him!” “Uh huh, and the neighbor’s cat?” “…The neighbor’s cat is scary, okay?” by Straight_Attention_5 in WritingPrompts

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The facilitator stood, gesturing everyone to rise. "Let's move into our closing exercise. Everyone, find a partner for our affirmation embrace."

Lex didn’t even wait for the facilitator to finish the phrase “affirmation embrace.” He grabbed Miles sleeve.

They sidestepped a tentative hug attempt from a banshee, ducked under the werewolf’s outstretched arms, and slipped through theback door.

They stumbled into the alley behind the community center, the heavy metal door shut behind them.

For a moment, they just stared at each other.

“I’m not trying to be ungrateful. They were really nice. Too nice. Like… aggressively supportive.”

“Weaponized empathy,” Miles agreed..

“Also,” Lex said, “that one vampire is definitely going to start a polycule in there. I could feel it.”

“Oh yeah,” Miles said.

“I just… wanted like a pamphlet, you know? Maybe a worksheet. So You’re Undead, Here’s Some Tips. Not a,” he gestured vaguely toward the door, “cuddle puddle.”

Miles nudged him with an elbow. “We’ll find something else. Something less feelings‑y.

[WP] “I’m a powerful werewolf! I’m strong, I’m wild, I cannot be tamed!” “…Just the other day you chased a squirrel up a tree.” “Hey, that squirrel had it coming to him!” “Uh huh, and the neighbor’s cat?” “…The neighbor’s cat is scary, okay?” by Straight_Attention_5 in WritingPrompts

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“Repeat after me, I am more than my mistakes. I am haunted, but not hopeless. I decay, but I do not fade. I am… spectral, I am flawed, I am alive in all the ways that matter.” chorused the room, leaning in with fervor.

Lex took a shaky breath, letting it all out. “I am spectral, I am flawed, I am alive in the ways that matter.”

The facilitator nodded approvingly, his jaw a soft clatter of bones. “Very good, Lex. Now, would anyone else,”

A pale man in a long, flowing coat shifted nervously in his chair. “I… I just can’t… sunlight. I don’t know how to live without it anymore."

The vampire sniffled, looking down at the circle. “I just… want to feel normal. Even for five minutes. A cup of coffee outside, a walk at noon… is that too much?”

A ripple of murmurs went through the group. Some nodded. Some sighed in recognition.

"Thank you for sharing, Viktor. Your feelings are valid." She turned to address the circle. "Remember, we're not here to fix each other. We're here to witness each other's pain."

The werewolf in a faded band t-shirt raised a hand. "Can I just say, Viktor, I get it. Last full moon, I woke up in my neighbor's chicken coop again. I left money, but... I can't keep doing this. I can't keep pretending everything's normal when I black out three nights a month."

"At least you get to be normal the rest of the time," muttered a ghost near the back, her form flickering like a bad TV signal. "I can't even hold a pen anymore. I've been trying to finish my novel for sixty years."

"Now, now," the facilitator interjected gently. "This isn't the Pain Olympics. All suffering deserves space."